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my mistake

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my mistake

my mistake
ruined it all
im sorry
im so stupid

so stupid
im paying for 
my stupid mistake

tore away from friends
dissapointed my parents agian
can't i do anything right?

im left with fake smiles
walking many miles
waking in the night 
forever paying for my mistake 

im tired of living like this
im sorry
for making that stupid mistake

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:28:00 PM
    This is a poem about realizing that when you make mistakes you should own up to those mistakes. You feel unworthy or a better word would be guilty. Everybody makes mistakes but until you are really able to own up to them be an adult because you never want to repeat the same ol' stupid silly mistakes over and over again. You learn from your mistakes if you're lucky you learn something and know not to repeat mistakes that could have bad consequences and bring more negative thoughts and...