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john loving iii
Date: 2/27/2013 3:31:00 AM
Love is the joys we find in children.the things we missed the first time around.the goal that didn't miss by a child.
David Williams
Date: 1/11/2013 12:27:00 PM
Frank excellent collab, very romantic indeed, love both parts, good work...David
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/9/2013 9:08:00 PM
Sooo so very beautiful.Bravo to both of you.Both managed to mist my eyes;)
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/27/2012 12:28:00 PM
ok, I think you got my mail. Let me read this poem now. wow, this is one of the best collaborations I have ever seen done, because you both have described so beautifully what love is for the each one of you. Who thought up this creative way to discuss the topic of love? The lines about the grandchildren, from the both of you, are very precious.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/27/2012 12:25:00 PM
soupmail, frank
Sukmawati Komala
Date: 12/25/2012 8:45:00 AM
this is very very Amazing,.. i really enjoyed so much ,,thank you Frank and Lucinda for your wonderful work,,, and wishing you both have a merry merry christmas day :) <3
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/23/2012 11:45:00 AM
Awesome Frank and Lucinda just wonderful xx
Owen Yeates
Date: 12/21/2012 12:53:00 PM
Hi frank gave this a seven but should have been so much more great collab, have a wonderful christmas and a great new year my friend, all the best Owen
Heather Ober
Date: 12/19/2012 9:56:00 AM
Oh, wow, I love this. My favourites are the scented pillowcase and the stuffed dog. So very sweet.
Becca Lucas
Date: 12/16/2012 7:26:00 PM
Very beautiful, both of you :)
Richard Palmer
Date: 12/16/2012 11:05:00 AM
wow,wonderful LUCINDA and FRANK,enjoyed
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/13/2012 12:14:00 AM
luv definitely exists .. this is quite amazing and unique Frank my friend .. a wonderful collab .. a meaningful thought provoking write luv .. wishing u and family blessed holidays as I say thankxx for my first place win in Personification .. my baby is still a part of us all .. appreciate the honor ..
Yvette Lisa Ndlovu
Date: 12/12/2012 3:42:00 PM
Love the "she caught me staring..." part and the last line. Sometimes I wonder if love really does exist and words like this give me hope :)
Cindy Cayton
Date: 12/12/2012 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Frank, check out my masterpiece of a lifetime... only God and my hand did that one. I love you, Cindy