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Fantasy Worlds revealed

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Fantasy Worlds revealed

What will your words, say about who you are?
Fantasy revealed, mystery worlds unfold.
No limiting you, choose a distant star

You are so unique, unafraid and bold.
Take us on a trip, bend our perspective.
Fantasy revealed, mystery worlds unfold.

Through imagination, the gift you give.
You are the master, you can take control.
Take us on a trip, bend our perspective.

To win my contest, you must pay the toll.
A task that's worthwhile, will demand a price.
You are the master, you can take control.

Direction and mood, you may go with nice.
Some will choose darker, That's also okay.
A task that's worthwhile, will demand a price

I anxiously wait, to hear what you say
Some will choose darker, that's also okay.
what will your words say, about who you are?
No limiting you, choose a distant star.


Pen starts writing.
Breath caught in your throat
What will your words reveal?

Welcome my new contest, three first prizes of Fifty Dollars. This is a challenging one.
Difficult form. See the above example of the forms. Are you up for a challenge???
Don't forget the Questionku Chaser!

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  1. Date: 2/23/2014 10:23:00 AM

    Oh...where was I back then? :) You sure knew how to get everyone excited about this. You haven't posted a contest in a while.....I don't know if I'd join, Richard....I wouldn't be able to take it if I didn't place or didn't do well. My win in the Girl Rising will carry me on. :) Lovely poem.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 2/23/2014 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know....I was thinking the same thing. I can't believe she's gone.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/23/2014 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have no doubt you would have done great. Contests are fun to host but so much time is required. It is surreal to read Linda's comment below.
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:36:00 AM

    this is a brilliant example Richard and a definite challenge luv .. fantasy a unique theme as well .. my wheels are at work .. thankxx for my win in Questionku luv .. am very honored and happy u posted this great example for us ..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/13/2012 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda-Marie, I am sure with your talent this will be a natural for you. Good luck.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 5:41:00 PM

    what a great piece you penned here Richard. The contest sounds very interesting. Rollo

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Rollo, I hope you give it a try.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 5:16:00 PM

    just tried a new form,HAIKU,for the first time,it's posted,gonna give your contest a go,love challenges,great way to advertise your competition,original,love it

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good luck Richard, have a nice evening.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 5:01:00 PM

    great "Model" for us and incentive to write! thanks for drawing my attention to this. I sure hope I can get around to your contest. Terzanelles take a lot out of me but if I get time this weekend, I will surely try another one!! Luv, andrea

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope you have time too enter. Looking forward to reading your entry.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:32:00 PM

    Richard, first I love your poem, well done, this form is difficult but I do love the dark aspect of the theme and I will accept your challenge and enter your contest within the next few days. I am a slow writer these days. Thanks for the inspiration. Constance

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 1:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am pleased you are accepting the challenge.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 12:39:00 PM

    I see what you mean by difficult. It looks like you put a lot of time into this one. I have never seen this form before but I like it.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Excellent Isaiah, I look forward to your submission.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:06:00 AM

    I am all about the villanelle form with the repetition of lines, but i have yet to write a terzanelle! A challenge indeed... One I am certainly up for :)

    Currin Avatar Anne Currin Date: 12/12/2012 8:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I really must thank you for getting my creative juices flowing and inspiring the last two poems I wrote :) I thoroughly enjoyed writing a terzanelle for the first time!
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good for you Anne, I am looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:09:00 AM

    wow teriffic example, Richard,, time permitting up for the challenge...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, I think you would do really well!
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 7:34:00 AM

    Sounds like fun , and l like this one blondy xx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/12/2012 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Looking forward to what you come up with.