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Rose window

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Rose window

every year 
the same idea
while driving stress-less
encircled by the holiday scenery

we’re wondering
the old Danish building
with the white rose window
and its  absent
last spoke of the wheel
each having each our own guess
will it be
furthermore 
spoke less

we both felt
each time
all those years
while passing by
this is an encore real 
treasury moment of awareness 
now we are so near 

this time
we were silenced
by the discovery
we actually see
the last spoke of the wheel

our light bulb moment
won’t be the same
when we will be on our way
we’ll say 
it took them quite  a while
but now their rose window is okay 

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Nice one

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/13/2012 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you enjoyed reading this one. TY for taking the time also to comment. :-) Ellie Daphne