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Crossing My Jordan

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Crossing My Jordan

rondelets

Feeling the way
Lower the windows, breathe out loud
feeling my way.
Watch the birds at work and  play;
remember what shines past the cloud.
Count the blessings God's allowed
feeling my way.

Healing the way.
Less-traveled route, just what I need
healing my way.
Time for pardon and time to pray.
Enjoy the route, lower the speed;
redeem the time, plan a good deed
healing my way.

Sealing the way.
Work at dialogue, turn off the phone
sealing my way.
Hear the cows moo, hear my horse neigh.
Script a conversation, all alone
work to engage my  friendliest tone,
sealing my way.



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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:12:00 PM

    Reason, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:23:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Reason xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:03:00 PM

    I just loved you using more than 1! Great job. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:54:00 AM

    Reason good metaphors and good luck...David

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 12/12/2012 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, David, I'll need more than luck, this is a raw piece.