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Love Train Haiku

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Love Train Haiku

ATTRACTION,,,,,

                    Eyes glued to body,
                    Roaming from head to toe,
                    Drooling mouth water...

FIRST LOVE,,,,,,
                    
                    A sudden attack,
                    Swept off your feet,
                    Above cloud nine...

IN LOVE,,,,,,,,,,,

                    Communication amazing,
                    Thoughts wave connect,
                     Heart beating as one...
   

               My first HAIKU

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 9:02:00 PM

    Great, Richard. I enjoyed this.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 10/31/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    happy you did,thanks Sherese
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:07:00 PM

    Richard, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 10/31/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Linda a.k.a Poet A oxox
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 2:08:00 AM

    Hey, nice structuring. Lusty kind of haiku - senryu? Keep riding that train!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/6/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    toot toot,lol I will Michael thanks much
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:25:00 AM

    he he.. so fantastic <3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 6/6/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks S.K oxox
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:23:00 PM

    Amazing Haikos -very impressive. Thanks for your appreciation of my Senryu Love, Richard -Mohammad

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/24/2013 8:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Mohammad,you are welcome
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:31:00 AM

    This is awesome....describes the initial attraction to true love perfectly in so few words.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/13/2013 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Juanita,try my best
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:04:00 AM

    Keep them going - if these are your first attempts there is promise for you... one small hint is with the last one, just do a recount of first line...? Not an expert but I do try them myself, so hope it helps.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/10/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Anna,happy you enjoyed,gonna try a few more getting the knack of it lol
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:01:00 AM

    Greetings. I found these vivid and engaging. Particularly the first. I could just see the drool! lol Love Haiku.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/10/2013 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Mari,someone needs a dribbler lol
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:21:00 AM

    Richard, my friend, As you may know, I had a bad case of Haiku fever awhile back and can speak with some authority on the subject. Once started they are persistant little devils. and can really get under your skin. Now you can trap them and if you get enough of them, cook them up..... They go great with beer...... great Job..... Jake

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/8/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much John,you get the beers,I will do the cooking lol
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 6:40:00 PM

    Really like the three steps. Think that happens to a lot of people. But what happens when we fall out of love? A follow up haiku perhaps?

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/2/2013 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ok gonna give it a shot,thanks Frank
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:56:00 AM

    I love Haiku, Richard. Keep writing them. And thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/2/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU Daver,you are welcome
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:27:00 AM

    Well I like these well enough,,, I wrote a few myself... Happy New Year Richard ;}

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/2/2013 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    happy new year Debbie,thank you oxox
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:03:00 PM

    Hello Richard, , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the love train haiku..love them. ~xox~LINDA

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 1/2/2013 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Linda,wishing you the greatest 2013 gift LOVE AND MORE LOVE,have a wonderful year oxox
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 1:58:00 PM

    This is really good, I love it

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/30/2012 5:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Briana
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:41:00 AM

    HAPPY NEW YEAR 2013,RICHARD !!!!!!! / / oxox Anne-Lise :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/30/2012 5:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Anne,same to you,oxox
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:21:00 AM

    Richard, i appreciate your stopping by, somehow they are granted, nice one too it feels like first love too.. hmm!- Lucas-

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/29/2012 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Lucas,lol
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 5:50:00 AM

    Hey Richard...thank you so much for your stopping by,,, and appreciate so very much your nice comment... wishing you have a blessed new year...Happy New Year ...<3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/29/2012 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are welcome SK,same to you oxox for the new year
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:57:00 AM

    Great job!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/24/2012 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Susan,but I think it needs a little work
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 6:36:00 PM

    Merry Christmas and belated birthday Richard.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/23/2012 8:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Richard
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 3:36:00 PM

    i hear Gladys Knight in the background while reading these goodies...keep it flowing poet!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/23/2012 8:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Scribe,have a Merry Christmas
  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:35:00 AM

    A little Christmas visit to you Richard. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and nice!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - MERRY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/23/2012 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Merry Christmas to you too Anne,warm oxox,fulljoy your holidays
  1. Date: 12/22/2012 1:12:00 PM

    I like it! Thanks for your comments. :) $honie

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/22/2012 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Shonie,you are welcome
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 12:55:00 PM

    Hi Richard just dropped by to wish you and your family all the best for christmas and the new year, all the best Owen

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/22/2012 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    same to you OWEN,enjoy to the fullest,thanks much
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Nice ones Richard. soup xx

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/22/2012 2:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Mandy,oxox
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 3:38:00 PM

    wow I love it lovely!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/21/2012 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Lisa
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:49:00 AM

    Count your syllables.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/21/2012 4:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    soup mail,need more info,thanks SITUATION
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:30:00 PM

    Wow! That's really great! I love it...Thanks for your comments on my site..Hugs, xxoo Holly Moore

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/19/2012 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Holly,you are welcome,oxox
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 6:39:00 PM

    Nice work! Now that's clarity of expression man. Read...

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/18/2012 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much David
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 12:44:00 PM

    Hi Richard - This is fantastic! Very clever and sweet. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for stopping by. - Gail

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/18/2012 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Gail,you are welcome
  1. Date: 12/16/2012 9:57:00 AM

    Good job for your first attempt at haiku. I really connected to the second one. Thank you.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer Date: 12/18/2012 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are welcome,thank you too Joann
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