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Love Train Haiku

ATTRACTION,,,,,

                    Eyes glued to body,
                    Roaming from head to toe,
                    Drooling mouth water...

FIRST LOVE,,,,,,
                    
                    A sudden attack,
                    Swept off your feet,
                    Above cloud nine...

IN LOVE,,,,,,,,,,,

                    Communication amazing,
                    Thoughts wave connect,
                     Heart beating as one...
   

               My first HAIKU

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  1. Date: 6/21/2014 4:28:00 PM
    Wonderful first haiku Richard they flow so well together. Hugs jan xxx

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/26/2014 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much Jadazzle,oxox
  1. Date: 5/19/2014 4:46:00 PM
    Can I have a ride on this love train, Richard.... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 5/20/2014 1:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hop aboard girl,enjoy the ride,,,thanks Skat oxox
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Great, Richard. I enjoyed this.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 10/31/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    happy you did,thanks Sherese
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:07:00 PM
    Richard, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 10/31/2013 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Linda a.k.a Poet A oxox
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 2:08:00 AM
    Hey, nice structuring. Lusty kind of haiku - senryu? Keep riding that train!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/6/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    toot toot,lol I will Michael thanks much
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:25:00 AM
    he he.. so fantastic <3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 6/6/2013 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks S.K oxox
  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Amazing Haikos -very impressive. Thanks for your appreciation of my Senryu Love, Richard -Mohammad

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/24/2013 8:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Mohammad,you are welcome
  1. Date: 1/13/2013 1:31:00 AM
    This is awesome....describes the initial attraction to true love perfectly in so few words.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/13/2013 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Juanita,try my best
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:04:00 AM
    Keep them going - if these are your first attempts there is promise for you... one small hint is with the last one, just do a recount of first line...? Not an expert but I do try them myself, so hope it helps.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/10/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Anna,happy you enjoyed,gonna try a few more getting the knack of it lol
  1. Date: 1/10/2013 12:01:00 AM
    Greetings. I found these vivid and engaging. Particularly the first. I could just see the drool! lol Love Haiku.

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/10/2013 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Mari,someone needs a dribbler lol
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:21:00 AM
    Richard, my friend, As you may know, I had a bad case of Haiku fever awhile back and can speak with some authority on the subject. Once started they are persistant little devils. and can really get under your skin. Now you can trap them and if you get enough of them, cook them up..... They go great with beer...... great Job..... Jake

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/8/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much John,you get the beers,I will do the cooking lol
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 6:40:00 PM
    Really like the three steps. Think that happens to a lot of people. But what happens when we fall out of love? A follow up haiku perhaps?

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/2/2013 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok gonna give it a shot,thanks Frank
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 8:56:00 AM
    I love Haiku, Richard. Keep writing them. And thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/2/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU Daver,you are welcome
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:27:00 AM
    Well I like these well enough,,, I wrote a few myself... Happy New Year Richard ;}

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/2/2013 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    happy new year Debbie,thank you oxox
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:03:00 PM
    Hello Richard, , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the love train haiku..love them. ~xox~LINDA

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 1/2/2013 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much Linda,wishing you the greatest 2013 gift LOVE AND MORE LOVE,have a wonderful year oxox
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 1:58:00 PM
    This is really good, I love it

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/30/2012 5:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Briana
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:41:00 AM
    HAPPY NEW YEAR 2013,RICHARD !!!!!!! / / oxox Anne-Lise :)

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/30/2012 5:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you very much Anne,same to you,oxox
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:21:00 AM
    Richard, i appreciate your stopping by, somehow they are granted, nice one too it feels like first love too.. hmm!- Lucas-

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/29/2012 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Lucas,lol
  1. Date: 12/29/2012 5:50:00 AM
    Hey Richard...thank you so much for your stopping by,,, and appreciate so very much your nice comment... wishing you have a blessed new year...Happy New Year ...<3

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/29/2012 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are welcome SK,same to you oxox for the new year
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Great job!

    Palmer Avatar Richard Palmer
    Date: 12/24/2012 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Susan,but I think it needs a little work
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