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  1. Date: 1/25/2014 5:11:00 PM

    Hands touching, a smile, a kiss, simple gestures that can mean so much. I love the form you used and the depth within these gestures.

  1. Date: 1/13/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Deep, tender and loving. The last kiss that shall ever be given, and bestowed back to the ones that are living. It's not hard to see why it won in the contest. Have a lovely Sunday David :)

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 8:24:00 PM

    Have so profoundly cared to hold a hand the hand of that one person...who truly can make everything absolutely OK great capture!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Very beautiful,Katherine

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:10:00 PM

    David, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 4:19:00 PM

    I love this poem it is so touching very nicely pened

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot my friend xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 3:14:00 PM

    A powerful write full of passion and sadness. Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:31:00 AM

    read this gem twice tmfvs

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:29:00 AM

    How beautiful it is when one is able to cherish every living moment without taking it forgranted.To see the beauty in others is to see the beautyn oneself..awesome.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 7:59:00 AM

    Tender and sad at the same time.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 3:49:00 AM

    Superbly done Rondelets with lovely refrains all three. beautiful and emotive write David. loved the read.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:26:00 AM

    This is a superbly splendid write my dear friend, David! I extremely love it! A winning piece for sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by on my latest poem leaving a very inspiring comment as well. All the best and good luck always! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:10:00 AM

    Words seem to be coming from deep inside, really enjoyed this one, David, I am fine. hope you are having happy days again, God bless!! jag

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:31:00 AM

    Yes, very beautiful.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:05:00 PM

    This is so beautiful. And incredibly sensual in a soft sweet kind of way, excellent.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:27:00 PM

    'david, is this the one you were telling me about? why wouldn't you want to use this in the contest. It's absolutely wonderful. Please enter it right away!! Deb should really like it and also she said we could do more than one stanza if we wanted to! Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:20:00 PM

    just beautiful, David. Glad to see you've got a new contest - if you visit my page, please ignore the latest post

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:51:00 PM

    A fine heart warming poem, David!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:47:00 PM

    so very romantic and emotional indeed.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 1:26:00 PM

    skin on skin yes it's the touch that matters. from a firm hand shake to the ultimate act of love. from a hand on the shoulder to the final embrace or hug.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Very romantic..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind review was greatly appreciated..Sara

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 7:31:00 AM

    hi David wonderful write my friend such deep expreesion, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 6:46:00 AM

    Hey YOU I don't have this yet! Did you enter it? I really like this form! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:03:00 AM

    Wow, very beautiful and romantic! I like the form and I love the refrains. Well done! (as you would say LOL) Thanks for your comments on "Time Passes." Love, Holly

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:03:00 AM

    WHoa David! Very beautifully done! Love and kindness are those which hold humans together and calms their heart. Well done!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:06:00 AM

    A beautiful write here, David sentimental and romantic... wowser xx

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:55:00 PM

    Wow, this is a very sentimental and wondrous write my friend! You have delighted me with such an awesome and incredible poem here David! I really enjoyed reading this beautiful and lovely piece this evening! Great Work!!