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Creep you out

After all the things i did for you
And comfort when your feeling blue
When your dressed fancy and i say your beautiful
Or when i complement you when your feeling dull

But i creep you out?

That moment when Josh yelled at you
And i made him feel like a fool
Made him apologize and say that he was in the wrong
But you look at me as if i may be dumb

i creep you out...

The times that your unaware of
When people degrade you
I'm the one that stands tough
Attacking your rumors

I CREEP YOU OUT!!

How could you say this
When you don't even know me
Feelings of sadness and anger
Ignited by what you told me

Fine, thats how it is
I know you didn't ask for it
for my protection against the things
I don't know why i do it

...very well...

Forgive me for my creepiness
I apologize for being me
i have nothing else to say, 
but believe me i will make you pay.

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Nice poem! :)

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Damn....this is one hell of a write!!! I felt every emotion here..excellent read!!

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    Date: 12/12/2012 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks.