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In a Line Stood the Day


The grey chill hung low and dripped from the faces;
Faces that had once known and understood.
Dreams drifted and blended creating an everlasting image
Of the woman we once knew.                 Cold feet…
Standing with heavy heart, silent words mouthed from
Icy lips…
The day stood and watched as the clouds passed, overhead
Birds sang…beyond houses, beyond touching.
Hands held uniting the colour of the day…
Minutes threaded their way through cold breath
And whispered her name…her age forgotten!
Her face; lives on in the blank stare of those that stand 
 In silence…the stars will once again return; swimming
And shimmering amongst the blackness of the faces
Who stand and watch the day drip into night…
The life we knew and cared for has been poured into…
A cask…of bitterness, of dreams, of unspoken words…


© 10/12/2012

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:26:00 PM

    A deep and affecting write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 6:06:00 AM

    Sad words, David but rich imagery. Touched. Sherese

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:06:00 PM

    A very special write David!

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:44:00 AM

    congrats on this wonderful winner David,, really like this, i love the classical feel to the whole poem...

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:58:00 PM

    David, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:31:00 PM

    congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:15:00 PM

    aha, it's my faved poem here but I think it belongs at the TOP. Congrats on the win, David.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot David xx

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:20:00 AM

    Congrats. David, loved it......Seren

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Thanks for the comment! Looks like you have a lot of good poetry

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 7:20:00 PM

    Very beautiful, David..It has much emotion to it...Thanks for your comments and helping me with my ghazal..we did good! Love, Holly

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:08:00 AM

    You are on a roll xx

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:23:00 PM

    wow, David. it's sad and so beautiful. Gotta fave this one!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 12:14:00 PM

    Hi david woow awesome words my friend enjoyed, all the best Owen

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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 11:13:00 AM

    This is a truly splendid and wondrous write my friend! I loved reading this tremendous and awesome poem this afternoon! What a delightfully amazing piece, Great Work!!