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Fireflies dance

Lovers kiss under
a full moon, as fireflies dance
among  the trees
While  sounds of crickets chirping
Play a lovely melody

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:06:00 PM

    Thank you Joseph, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:51:00 PM

    For those who have lived the experience, this poem is so much more touching. I can also hear the crickets chirping, nightfall.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:38:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Joseph

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Joseph xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:44:00 PM

    Joseph :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:07:00 PM

    I'm happy to see this made the winners' list, Joseph. Wonderful.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 5:57:00 PM

    an idealic scene! Light & Love

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 12/12/2012 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Debbie
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 6:19:00 AM

    Very expressive and descriptive depicting the romantic..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Great job..Winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 12/11/2012 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sara
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:54:00 PM

    It's very pretty, Joseph. For Susan's contest?

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 12/11/2012 5:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea...yes
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:47:00 PM

    love your tanka, romantic, with a good upcoming sound..pd

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 12/11/2012 5:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you PD
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:18:00 PM

    so sweet...enjoyed so much your lovely verse thank you Joseph for nice sharing <3<3<3 :) SK

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 12/11/2012 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you SK..