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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:16:00 PM

    awwee...love it !!! I'm a sucker for a happy ending.

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:48:00 AM

    "Fullness, Joy and peace of heart" Diamonds are beautiful but treachorous. I liked the Spnish in the poem as well. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 6:21:00 PM

    John, I really admire and respect the talent that it took to create this piece. I believe that it could work into a form of its own. I wish you well in 2013. May all your words rhyme and fit as needed and all your entries be winners... Reapectfully.... Jake

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 5:00:00 PM

    And she lived happily ever after! Up in the Andes mountains with her love, how romantic and picturesque Joh. Are you making progress on your trip. Will be in touch soon and hope all is well for a wonderful new year! Lizzie

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 12:20:00 AM

    I love the way you weaved this beautiful story in . a poem.Such a happy ending fo r the sad widow.I love the difference in season.Firstly a dark cold December and later the December of love..hope and melting snow. Going to my favs.

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 6:59:00 AM

    Great write, visually mesmerising. Enjoyed. Wish you a happy new year...Thanks for stopping by. , Mehnaz.

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 4:17:00 PM

    Jon love this and very clever, happy New Year...David

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 4:28:00 PM

    Breath taking piece John. You truly have a way of capturing the essence of the human spirit. Happy New Year John, I also really appreciated your Soup mail at Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 8:08:00 AM

    So good, John. The ending is awesome! So enjoyed :)

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 6:52:00 AM

    A little Christmas visit to you John. <3 Hope your Christmas will be peaceful and beautiful!! Sending you a big, warm Christmas hug !!! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS - // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/22/2012 5:47:00 PM

    This is visually, emotionly and intelectualy stimulating. Well done John. Merry Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:37:00 PM

    John, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:18:00 PM

    A great poem! Beautifully thought out and written.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 5:27:00 AM

    WOW love it! A unique and beautifully written presentation... I thoroughly enjoyed it! One for the books... kudos! Cheers, Jack

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf Date: 12/11/2012 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is always a pleasure to hear from you Jack and I sincerely appreciate your compliment.
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:15:00 AM

    John I just love this, it flows like a hymn being softly sung, outstanding write...Merry Christmas to you ,...David

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf Date: 12/11/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, David. I shall reread it out loud. I was not fond of the sound of it, but the hymn reference does fit, there is much reverence in this story.
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:07:00 PM

    Stunning. I love it when a poet trusts his instincts and trys something different, delves into a way to tell his story that is difficult to define. So much to like here. That last line had me hanging on, unwilling to let go... do you know what I mean? It ends where and how it should, but I stayed there, happily. I think your rhyme fusion is remarkable. Kudos! I'm dazzled... smiles from Cyndi

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf Date: 12/11/2012 11:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Cyndi. This was the hardest piece I've ever written. Your words are very encouraging.
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:29:00 PM

    That is really something there John...The whole way you constructed it is great.I had to read it over a couple times because I truly enjoyed it.Very nice! :o)

    Wulf Avatar John Wulf Date: 12/11/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Dan. Hey, I like the new photo with the shades and the enigmatic smile:-)