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  1. Date: 1/18/2013 2:12:00 PM
    This is amazing, I love it. The optimism in your words is so refreshing! Very well done

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Reading this one again... hope i did not miss something... you know me, i want in on all your visions... hum!! it is not my fault you paint such wonderful imagery.. i like the way you went into deep with this poem... a journey playing out its own...xool..pd

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 9:17:00 PM
    Yasmin; This beautiful, I can just picture it. This is a real Gem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:31:00 AM
    what's up with YOU?

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 10:31:00 AM
    I love this one of yours, Yasmin. Wow, one of your best, dearie. About my life lately, just enjoying three weeks of no school and I am all ready for Xmas, with gifts having gotten wrapped by me and put under my blue/silver tree last night. I was up so late. When I am off work, I stay up as late as I like. It's no matter. My body won't let me sleep more than 5 or 6 hrs. anyway! Joe is on the road but will be here soon for today and maybe till tuesday. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 7:53:00 AM
    excellent write!

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:20:00 AM
    Hi Yasmin congrats on you win in the contest with this sublime write, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:38:00 AM
    I see you.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 6:48:00 PM
    A wonderful and memorable write Yasmin. I love this! Congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Michael's "A Road Still Driven" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 11:35:00 PM
    Tremendous job Yas always love your work xoxo Carma

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:02:00 PM
    There is a national shortage on chocolate so we will have to switch to something else that is equally as sweet....Monk fruit perhaps????....Congrats on this win! U rock big time!!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 2:48:00 AM
    Beautiful write Yasmin! In the search for wholeness the body might get weak but the spirit carries on. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 2:22:00 AM
    Congrats dear Yas on such a splendid win!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:16:00 AM
    Once again Yasmin in the winners box love Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:30:00 PM
    This is REALLY good, Yasmin. I am seeing below here that it was in Michael's contest and won? I don't know what place you got, but you sure deserved a win. congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:13:00 PM
    Yasmin, it is nice to see you on Michael's winning list... a warm congratulations and good night~:-) PD

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:27:00 PM
    Enjoyed your rhymes Yasmin, you speak well the yearning of the heart, xxxx Rose

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:46:00 PM
    Ah, yes, Yasmin!...I can surely identify with this beautiful couplet of yours...the last verse absolutely nails it - Tim

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:08:00 PM
    Perfect! in sentiment & form..full of emotion and longing, I so wish your road was easier. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love