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thinking of him

thinking of him a far off look and the ring has changed hands dec cghjr

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:18:00 PM

    by the way, I guess you will notice lots of announcements in your email for my comments today. I have not visited you in such a long while. You gotta comment to me once in a while because I LOVE haiku and other small poems and I go nuts if I see a row of them to visit!!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:17:00 PM

    VERY nice.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:35:00 AM

    Charles, This made me think of my husband. After his death the treasured watch went to my son.Thought provoking poem. Anne

    Henderson Avatar Charles Henderson Date: 1/6/2013 4:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It came from an old western I watched a while back. A suiter accused her of living in the past and she stopped, a far away look then pulled the ring off and put it back on the other hand.
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:23:00 AM

    I think divorce somehow. Whichever it another three lines packed with wallop.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 7:56:00 PM

    Intriguing and oddly disturbing, but I enjoyed the read. I am not certain if this is loss due to death or divorce. I don't know about the subjective/objective thing ... but if this is about death, perhaps " a haunted look" would clarify this, if this is about divorce, perhaps a "a wounded look" would provide more insight. Memorable work, Charles.