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A Frozen Tear

Home, a place I used to have
Replaced by the solace
The foreboding of winter
Sends a  chill deep within 

I hold hands with yesterday
We quietly embrace
Till the wind blows us free
The winter has set in
And now tiss only me

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  1. Date: 3/9/2013 12:23:00 AM

    I love the wording in this and how ..."wind chilled" it is. Great!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:33:00 AM

    I too hold hands with yesterday, walking alone in the thoughts and memories, wishing for one last endearing kiss. Beautiful poem, words that endear

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:00:00 AM

    '...I hold hands with yesterday, we quietly embrace,' lovely phrasing and wistful sentiment. Beautifully written! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:41:00 AM

    decided to read them all again my friend....Seren

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:45:00 PM

    As the song says; Its so hard to say good bye to yesterday. Another beautiful write. I like it a lot.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 3:30:00 PM

    I love the second stanza, they are so touching :)

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Holding hands with yesterday and so.many memories.BeAutiful poem.Welcome to poetrysoup :)

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:13:00 PM

    good poem,,thank you for sharing...pd

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso Date: 2/8/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much, very kind of you! :)