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I Fall On Knees ,I Beg For More

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I Fall On Knees ,I Beg For More

I Fall On Knees ,I Beg For More

Blue and brown, beige and black, green and grey,
His Kindness, a bounty, windfall to earthlings plain.
Nature for us, the gallant folks, a bliss.
Abused in tatters, bloodied blasts, gory, to the grave.
Benevolence, thus paid back, for us ignorance is bliss
Phantom hopes loomed in webs banal, dawn to dusk.
Then fall on knees bow and pray for more -of His Kindness?







Mehnaz Veetil
contest entry for, Kindness.

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  1. Date: 12/23/2012 8:26:00 AM
    You are talented, congratulations again.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You,.. :-)
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:15:00 PM
    Mehnaz, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank Youuu so much , love ,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Mehnaz xx

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/15/2012 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy for stopping by and reading my poem.... wish you great holidays ahead. love,Mehnaz.
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:11:00 PM
    I do hear how you feel, yet we do not know why He makes happen or needs to have happen what happens, I think we must try to move..one way or the other out of the path of danger..XXXOOO Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/15/2012 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the pick. Am happy and excited ...wish you great holidays ahead with lots of light and love......love,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Mehnaz, your poem is deep and profound, well done. Constance

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you , Constance ,...love ,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Mehnaz Veetil , love the pick me up feeling... good luck in the contest..pd

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-)..... thank you pd for stopping by...