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About This Poem

Emerald Tipped Leaves


emerald tipped leaves soaring

like a ticker tape parade

carrying the notes of a

vibrant sonata



Written by Gwendolen R. 
For Russell Sivey’s Contest “Natural Dodoitsu”
12-9-12

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    kash poet
    Date: 2/13/2013 9:22:00 PM
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    hi,You busy lady,post a new poem!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/12/2013 9:43:00 PM
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    I was looking at my original comment on this one. I must have gotten confused on the form requirements of dodoitu because i was thinking you needed to start with five syllables.Duh!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 1/12/2013 9:42:00 PM
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    this one was one with great thought put into it. I just loved it , Gwen. Congrats, and We have to talk one of these days!!
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    S. K. A. T.
    Date: 1/12/2013 12:17:00 PM
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    Gwendolen, , congratulations with your awesome win. SKAT
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 1/11/2013 10:05:00 PM
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    RIX, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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    craig cornish
    Date: 1/11/2013 10:51:00 AM
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    Glad you placed Gwendolin, you earned it with these images
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 1/10/2013 2:52:00 AM
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    congrads on an awesome win my baby girl..getting the chocolates out..haa..sending some huggs your way, i caught your hugg and holding it close to my heart..missing you dear friend..how you been,howz Sebi..
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    kash poet
    Date: 1/9/2013 6:35:00 PM
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    This one is so poetic Gwen.Congrats on your win in the contest.
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    Annalise Brigham
    Date: 1/9/2013 2:54:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your fantastic win, Gwendolyn! Love, Annalise
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 1/9/2013 2:40:00 PM
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    congrats Gwen....Seren
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    Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/9/2013 1:55:00 PM
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    Congratulations Gwendolen....
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 1/9/2013 1:24:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your winning spot Gwenny love good one xx
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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 12/20/2012 4:22:00 PM
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    Love it Gwen ;} You have a blessed Christmas Holiday Season ;}
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    Date: 12/16/2012 10:05:00 PM
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    beautiful..pd
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    Joe Maverick
    Date: 12/15/2012 11:38:00 AM
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    Enjoyed the variety, and vibrancy of the Write you have posted Gwendolen Hope it soars to the top.."
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 12/12/2012 3:29:00 PM
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    Now this is a sweet imaginative write!! Love the cool images it gives. Glad you like my Two Ice cubes lol. Love playing with words. Xox from Santa Michael
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    craig cornish
    Date: 12/10/2012 3:47:00 PM
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    Love the simile here and all the images!! soup mail
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 12/10/2012 3:29:00 PM
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    LOvely form and write my dear Paperclip Queen.... hugs n luv form Santa Michael
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 12/10/2012 12:24:00 PM
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    Hi Gwendoline beautiful like orchestral music to the ear but on the eye, well written, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen
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    Becca Lucas
    Date: 12/10/2012 11:43:00 AM
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    such a lovely poem !
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 12/10/2012 10:04:00 AM
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    this is the best Gwendolena, love this pssst, why can't my daughter shut up, i can't even write to you ion peace and i want to tell you so much... you are the gem sweetiepie, going for a chocolate break, yeah, me eating some for you too, you take a dip too in chocolate fondue..you look deli..how is Sebs...
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 12/10/2012 7:04:00 AM
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    Gwen this is rich in imagery and language. loved your poem here and yes many thanks for your lovely note at my page.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:17:00 PM
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    gwen, where is your first line?? This is SO WONDERFUL but I don't see a five syllable line coming first! Love this imagery. Wow. When will we talk next?
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    ilene bauer
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:01:00 PM
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    love the imagery here! very very nice!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2012 3:12:00 PM
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    "sighs my heart ..... but do not break" ..... this is lovely, Gwen. (How's the baby boy? - Has Grandma bought 102 Christmas gifts for him?) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Joseph May
    Date: 12/9/2012 2:40:00 PM
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    wonderfyl imagery Gwen.....best wishes
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    robert johnson
    Date: 12/9/2012 2:20:00 PM
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    Gently playing notes serene. Those beautiful emerald tipped leaves of green. In natures seasonal parade. A more beautiful sound has never been made. Beautiful Dodoitsu Gwen. Good luck. :)
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    Susan Palli
    Date: 12/9/2012 1:33:00 PM
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    nice imagery!
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/9/2012 1:33:00 PM
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    A beauty from a beauty , love it Gwen xx
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 12/9/2012 1:21:00 PM
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    I love this. Really beautiful..I've played classical music since I was five..sonata..good choice of words...Hugs, Holly Moore
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