Betrayed by Love's Lie by Linda-Marie SweetHeart


Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/14/2013 8:54:00 PM Dear Linda, my bff , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
Annalise Brigham Date: 12/15/2012 6:56:00 PM This is excellent, Linda Marie. Those curves in life can be so devastating... you've taking me down memory lane but it's just fleeting now. My best wishes for the contest. Hope you all are well, and holding up under the dark clouds that hangs above us now. There're no words to comfort the families but we offer prayers for them; that their pain will be bearable. Take care my friend... Love, Annalise
Lucilla Carrillo Date: 12/15/2012 9:49:00 AM Linda; This is really good. it kinda hits close to home, in a different place a different time. But some how it still hurts. I hope you win in the contest. Lucilla
Ravi Sathasivam Date: 12/10/2012 11:55:00 PM Amazing write. All the best for contest. Tfs
jack horne Date: 12/10/2012 1:28:00 PM awesome sonnet, my friend - a big winner, for sure
John Loving III Date: 12/10/2012 11:51:00 AM Nothing of what I expect to find but acceptable for a contest. Good luck.
Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 12/10/2012 9:09:00 AM A true reflection of words from a broken and deceived heart. You have created powerful lines in this beautiful Sonnet, concluding it with words which would continue to pierce deep in the mind and heart of its reader. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your contest entry. I have posted a Poem based on a story from Bible and would be thankful if you can leave your comments on it as it is based on a Story from Holy Bible. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K....SH LMB
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/9/2012 8:01:00 PM btw, do you have the same NJ address that you had over a year ago? let me know soon if it is different and give me your new address if you would like a card from me. I am sending cards to Soupers who have given me their addresses through the past few years. I spent NINE hours on my Xmas packaging and cards yesterday. Good grief! will be going to the PO tomorrow.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/9/2012 7:59:00 PM LInda, I want to do mine kind of on the same topic, of a charming cheater. You sure have come far here at Soup. I remember when I first met you and how much you hated sonnets. and now here you are just turning them out left and right!! Good job.
Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/9/2012 2:03:00 PM Nice to read your write on this chilly afternoon. Light & Love
Lynette Chachere Date: 12/9/2012 1:39:00 PM /: deception is always its lesson, just hope that things can keep moving from there. & you're right Linda, its a good thing to have friends all around ..even from a distance. And thanks, I've been just fine since then. same to you(: ~Always&Forever your poet friend Lynette ^_^
Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/9/2012 1:18:00 PM Refreshing as a spring's morning breeze! Good luck, although you do not need it!
Sara Kendrick Date: 12/9/2012 1:05:00 PM Reads like a winner...Good luck in Craig's contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
HGarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 12/9/2012 12:53:00 PM Dear SweetHeart of POETRYSOUP (and Me) Linda-Marie, May I be the first to Congratulate YOU, as I'm sure others will when YOU step into the Winners circle My Heart could feel the Emotions and the deep sadness in this Masterpiece.~ Soup Mail Call~ LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Silent Beau...Harry
Russell Sivey Date: 12/9/2012 12:30:00 PM This is a truly wondrous write my friend! I love this amazing and intriguing poem here Linda-Marie! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
Rachel St.Cross Date: 12/9/2012 9:43:00 AM ‡ Trying To Stay Afloat And Everything Touches Tainted ? Lost Amid One's Looking Glass In Shards Of Quicksand Deeper And Deeper ˜ Collateral The Damage Yet Whom Shall Lead Their Way Through This Ever Winding Maze In Woes ? Drugs ? Money ? Sex ? Possessions ? Power ? Let's Go Ask Frosty The Snowman He Knows, LOL. No! There Is Truly, Only 'One Way' Out ˜ To Be Set Free, Is To Be Free Indeed ˜ I Love Your Painting And Beauty Is Beauty And 'You, Are Beautiful!' 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *
Rachel St.Cross Date: 12/9/2012 9:34:00 AM ‡ A Myriad Of Reflections Fill One's Thoughts As Viewing This Profound In Bittersweet Beauty's Touching Verse, Sweet Beautiful LindaMarie! A Precious Heart Should Never Be Broken Amid Such An Askewed Light. Humanity Be Born Ever Thirsting Love ˜ Only For The Most To Find Themselves As Passing Through A Strippings Gauntlet While The Seasons And Years Pass By; Ripping The Purity, Innocence Ideals Slowly Away ? Many Finding Themselves Lost Amid This Daunting Forest Called Life ˜ Gasping For Breath,
Constance La France Date: 12/9/2012 8:51:00 AM Linda, an amazing Sonnet for the contest, full of deep and powerful emotions and sadness. I so enjoyed reading your poetry today. Constance
Yesha Shah Date: 12/9/2012 7:23:00 AM Of all things sad, the most painful perhaps are love and deceit and you penned them very perfectly Linda. Touching write but really exquisitely described in this lovely sonnet. Good luck.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 12/9/2012 7:22:00 AM a sad story of love deceived .. toying with emotions is dangerous with consequences poets .. lies have short legs .. enjoy with luv ..

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Betrayed by Love's Lie

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