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Take the ribbon from my hair

With the dawning of the day
like a fertile vine
which creeps amidst
the golden hue
of Tuscan fields
I yield my fruit
Before first autumn rain
I wait for you
Starved like a harvest moon
you come to me
Silk honey of dusk
A shadow,descending
in the cradle of my arms
feeding nectar from my lips
repeaning my soul
with  blazing fire
amuzing my solitude
On scarlet foliage-your kiss
In sleep your breath within me
~Dolce Vino~
Your fingers on my neck's nape
~Viola in concerto~

In sleep,once again in sleep
where eyelids close
to the bliss  of twilight dew
I see you

Dedicated to a great dad to our newborn...my husband


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  1. Date: 3/26/2013 7:19:00 AM

    This is incredible! Truly incredible...

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:25:00 AM

    Dumbfounded and Speechless! What does one say in the face of utter beauty starkly shiningbrightly in your face!! That was my First thought! Second thought: PURE ENVY...And that is so rare an emotion from me...Your Husband has it ALL...

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 11:40:00 AM

    I had to reread it... I loved it so. Beautiful dedication to a soul mate.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:00:00 PM

    I am back for a re-read ...it just gets better... David

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 7:23:00 AM

    A beautiful write Charma love xx

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 6:37:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Charma, I really enjoyed my reading towards to your verses :D, thank you for your comment before in my page,it is really uplifting :D - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:45:00 PM

    Charma, your poem is very beautiful... once again I'm very happy for you... pd

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:48:00 AM

    Beautiful poem and dedication,Charma..and a big congrat with your newborn!:)

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:03:00 AM

    charma, I've been reading some of your work and I'm very impressed by it, I've read quite a lot of it actually to get a good picture of you as a writer and I think you're a natural, a born poet, some of the phrasing is completely inspired and just sublime...you remind me of someone, a poet called leanne o'sullivan, and this poem in particular is very much after her style :-)

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/10/2012 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will search leanne o sullivan..tnks so much dear for reading my humble verses
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:58:00 PM

    It's wonderful to see you so happy in love with your husband , Charma and writing him this beautiful romantic poem. Did he love it? Dolce vino is such a yummy line. I hope your address is the same as the one i put in my address book that year you sent me a sweet card. I am sending you one this year. Luv, Andrea

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/10/2012 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And tnks for reading dear
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/10/2012 9:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    He loved the fact that i dedicated to him as a great dad:)
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Wonderful poem, Charmaine! ...and a great dedication. What did your husband said after reading it? My best wishes. Keep writing.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/10/2012 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The line he preferred most when he saw it on rough paper was ..dedicated. to a great dad etc. :).He said all the other words are like an abstract painting..but he liked it.tnks for reading my poem.
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Wow; this is beautiful Charma, once again congratulations with the edition to your family ;) love Wilma

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:53:00 AM

    Charma, the words just flow and are very poetic...very well done...David

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Very nice my dear friend... Wonderful dedication... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Beautiful poem.