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Flower Haiku 2: Thawing flower

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Flower Haiku 2: Thawing flower

thawing dead flower
protective frost leaves your world
undying moment 

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 10:58:00 PM
    nice poem - JH

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:57:00 PM
    a sad picture, but I enjoyed reading this.

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 8:04:00 AM
    They say to leave them so the birds can get the last of their seeds? Light & Love

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/9/2012 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Debie - as I wrote to Anne Lise - the moment is undying......... Obviously I've chosen the right words for expressing what I saw........... happening in the little garden in front of my house.. Awesome..... You also got the picture... Greetings from a thawing - wet - unpleasant cold Netherlands. The warmth of the snow is now really totally gone! Greetings....... :-) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:59:00 AM
    When spring comes it is a lovely flower that wakes up exactly the same place. - A well-written Haiku, Ellie. - - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/9/2012 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    the moment is undying: indeed! That's the follow up........... and everybody knows...... so not a necessity to tell - I thought for myself...... :-) Ellie Daphne