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Let Go Of The Rope

Let go of the rope my tethered friend
Your holding on to a futile end.

For if you fall what’s the consequence?
But if never tried life won’t make sense.

And if you try and don’t succeed 
You just may find its all you need.

See God is in the nothingness
Where pain resides along with bliss.

Its up to us to find the strength
And see what all this life is meant.

So take a fall, get up again 
And leave that world of bogeymen.

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:12:00 PM

    great message!!! The bogeymen do not really exist except in our mind and it's all about controlling our minds with positive energy!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 10:45:00 PM

    Whoa Bernard, so much strength in this poem, positiveness, great. Love Terry xoxo a 7>>>> a Fave

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo Date: 4/16/2013 10:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Terry, once again you lift me up with your precious comments. Thanks for stopping by, Hugs
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 7:38:00 PM

    Reading this poem again Bernard, still i find this poem with an interesting ending and twist... xox~ PD

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo Date: 4/10/2013 9:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Linda...Hugs
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Bernard Colasurdo :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup, so nice to read your write today. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:17:00 PM

    Hi Bernard. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I enjoyed reading your poem it resonates with me for sure. Good flow to read and a good message within. Enjoy poetry Soup - Shaz

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo Date: 12/8/2012 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Shaz, the Welcome is very welcomed : ) Thank You for the positive feedback, i've been apprehensive with sharing since I am new to writing and not sure how it will be taken. Bur writing brings me comfort since my wife passed 6 months ago from cancer. Thanks for making me feel welcomed. I will check out your poems