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Cold seduction

the moon seduces
a  beach to take a cold swim
storms fighting a shore 


©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:57:00 PM

    what an interesting way to describe it!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:01:00 AM

    - Another well written Haiku, Ellie. - - Have a fine Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/9/2012 7:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY Anne-Lise! For reading and commenting....... :-) Ellie Daphne.
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 4:33:00 PM

    pondering thoughts and i wondered who is happy tonight

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/9/2012 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Annie.. well - I was because of being able to write this(as you know it was a puzzle before finding the right words) :+) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 4:10:00 PM

    nice write Ellie,hope the shores win,lol

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/9/2012 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We'll see.......... You'll see TY for reading and commenting with hope! :+) Ellie Daphne