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Windows Of Gold

Windows of gold shone bright from the garden
The mist sits hovering on a slight white frost
The fox tracks in the frost visible, without a pardon
A blackbird and his wife sitting on the fence looking cold and lost.

The sun rises the windows reflect the coming cold winters day
The blackbird has spied the fox, so he’s not hopping down
The fox appears, hungry; he is after some new fresh prey
They spy each other the blackbird so black and his wife a dull brown

The fox sits he’s waiting a while, he appears to be in no hurry
The blackbird and his wife watch, with their heads on one side
Chattering away a flap of wings to say, we’re safe we need not worry
The fox just waits he watches blacky and his wife, and the fox her, he espied.

The sun rose high the golden window disappears and turned to dull black
The fox stands, he shakes his head, and he turns to walk away
The brown bird now happy the fox has gone hops down, she doesn’t look back
She hears her husband chattering; too late the fox has his breakfast for the day.

As the sun rises it shines on the windows that began as burning gold
A new day has started with new hope and promises anew
Never turn your back on the lessons learnt and common senses untold
The fox is waiting he needs to eat and his prey could be you.

© 8/12/2012 ~GG~

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Hi Mandy, I love this vision of a fox through a golden window, good poem.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/11/2012 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sheri, the sun hits the shed at the bottom of the garden at sunrise and it shines gold through them xx
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:41:00 AM

    Really this is a very nice poem with a very meaningful message conveyed. Love it, Mandy and many thanks for your comments.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 7:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yesha Love and it more than a pleasure xx
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:09:00 AM

    lovely write with a message for us all at the end

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Jack, hugs to all xx
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:58:00 AM

    That Devil the sly old fox awaits his opportunity to prey upon one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 7:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    He sure does Sara, he's just waiting xx
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 5:56:00 AM

    Very vivid and a good lesson. Thank you

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Bobb xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:22:00 PM

    Treed by a fox? / I think I'll pass / I'll watch safely / behind the glass. Enjoyed your poem.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    To right Jon lol xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:51:00 PM

    Mandy a lesson to be learned within your poem.. A clever write, but I was sad for his wife. Warm smiles, always, Connie

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always sad for the life lol Thanks Connie love xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:38:00 PM

    Nicely penned Mandy... best wishes ....hugs

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph, hugs xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:29:00 PM

    Such a neat interplay with these critters Mandy ; they sound like humans I know! :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And me Elizabeth lol xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 4:22:00 PM

    Always aware, good moral story Mandy :D thank you for your greetings on my page, you really make my day :D

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Yanny, you too love make mine xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Your writing is so magical Mandy, thank you for sharing such a beautiful nature poem with us today. Wishing you a beautiful weekend. Love,Gail

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wishing you all thats good for you Gail, you are a star to me xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:43:00 PM

    What a way to start my afternoon Mandy enjoyed this reading..

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Carma xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:28:00 PM

    love how you bring nature to us all Mandy, a scenic wonder enhanced by your wonderful poetry...

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks harry i am a country girl at heart xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Hi Mandy, really enjoyed reading this work. Have to keep my eyes open for that crafty fox. Rollo

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You do that Rollo you never know where hestrikes next lol xx
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Dear Mandy, I feel so close to YOU after reading YOUR POETRY thus far YOU have a way of making me feel YOUR thoughts. I'm not complaining LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal(Young) Liege...Harry - I think this is the second POEM of YOURS that was written in the future 8/12/2102 ~GG~

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/9/2012 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i travel in time Harry lol and thanks for your super comments xx