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Narcissus With a Glass of Water

'an empty verse' an empty hand ~understand~ The glass IN your hand can drown out ten- thousand and ten; Hearts, ~an emptiness~ looking for a f l o w e r . . . . . . . Oh, Holy Nights enlighten me to see, Ten Drops from the glass I could drown myself asking for a drink ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ I ponder the greatness of love and then I let it go two hands under the masters hand * * * * * * *Romans 16:11******* ******* A parade of parodies

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:31:00 PM

    Cindy, your poem is deep and beautiful... what more can i say...PD

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 4:30:00 PM

    I LOVE YOU CINDY LU! You said I could say it!! And I'm very proud to too!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Sending you just one word for this poem Cindy: - GORGEOUS!! - Wishing you a good and restful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:32:00 AM

    Very very good!!! love how you created this gem.... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:11:00 AM

    Using your creativity ad your talent on this one, enjoyed the read have a great weekend, May Roses amass on your window sill xxxx