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harry horsman
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Senryu 007
writing a sad poem while you keep breaking my heart... I will hold the pen. © Harry J Horsman 2012
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 12/15/2012 10:05:00 AM
Harry; I hope that your heart don't get totally broken. My moms' birthday was june 24th. She passed away this last September. have a great day and smile. Lucilla
Frank Polgar
Date: 12/13/2012 1:55:00 PM
Sad, but an enjoyable read.
Ralph Mason
Date: 12/11/2012 7:48:00 AM
strong emotions indeed. Warm thoughts, Ralph
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/10/2012 11:52:00 PM
Very deep meaningful write. Nice senryu. Enjoyed. Tfs
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/10/2012 9:48:00 PM
Harry, a sad thought... hopefully it is only a senryu, i do not like the image of your heart all broken....pd
Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2012 1:57:00 PM
Harry, love it so much, I love writing sad poems, O, I wonder why? Constance
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/9/2012 3:23:00 PM
The pen holds all emotions happy or sad. Nicely done. love phyl
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/9/2012 11:20:00 AM
Good one harry! Light & Love
Wilma Neels
Date: 12/9/2012 9:20:00 AM
And with each word you write your healing happens ;) gosh Harry I absolutely dig this write of yours. Hope you and your family are doing okay. Love Wilma
jack horne
Date: 12/9/2012 6:59:00 AM
wow, this one is so good, Harry
Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 12/9/2012 6:50:00 AM
This one is too good my friend. Outstanding and brilliantly composed lines. A superb Haiku from your crafted pen and thank you for your continued interest in my series love story Tesu. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Harry Horsman
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/9/2012 6:39:00 AM
Keep holding and writing with that pen. Great poets are borne from great emotion. Wishing you the very best.
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2012 5:53:00 AM
The pen might seem difficult to hold .... in sorrow. - BRAVO HARRY! - - Have a nice Sunday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Owen Yeates
Date: 12/9/2012 4:58:00 AM
Hi Harry no one better to hold the pen, all the best Owen
HOLLY MOORE
Date: 12/9/2012 2:38:00 AM
This is very emotional and heartbreaking. Giving a person so much power...Thanks for your lovely comments..you are the best! Hugs, Holly
kash poet
Date: 12/9/2012 2:36:00 AM
A great Senryu here Harry!Love this.
elizabeth wesley
Date: 12/8/2012 6:49:00 PM
Can I giggle? The last line is superb!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/8/2012 5:14:00 PM
soupmail for ya
Gail Angel Doyle
Date: 12/8/2012 1:13:00 PM
Very deep Harry, very powerful. I enjoyed your Senryu a great deal. Have a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail
Annie Lander
Date: 12/8/2012 12:35:00 PM
pondering thoughts love this...
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/8/2012 12:05:00 PM
I LOVE this one. It's a perfectly crafted senryu!!
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/8/2012 11:49:00 AM
Been there and lived that my friend... well expressed piece... Michael
Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/8/2012 11:47:00 AM
Ahhh!!I hope not true..Great expressive work..I really like this one..Thanks for the review of my work..The one about the fisherman was strickly imagination..Sara
Carl Fraser
Date: 12/8/2012 11:29:00 AM
Nicely done Harry,my pen has never let me down, blessings, Carl
Arild Andresen Ertsland
Date: 12/8/2012 10:46:00 AM
Masterpiece Harry! This one really touched my thoughts,deep one indeed my friend.Best wishes if for a contest!
Joseph May
Date: 12/8/2012 9:16:00 AM
nice write Harry... best wishes
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/8/2012 9:13:00 AM
deep one harry xx
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 12/8/2012 9:06:00 AM
Quite thought provoking, Harry, nice effort!! Jag