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Senryu 007

writing a sad poem
while you keep breaking my heart...
I will hold the pen.

© Harry J Horsman 2012 

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:05:00 AM

    Harry; I hope that your heart don't get totally broken. My moms' birthday was june 24th. She passed away this last September. have a great day and smile. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 1:55:00 PM

    Sad, but an enjoyable read.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 7:48:00 AM

    strong emotions indeed. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:52:00 PM

    Very deep meaningful write. Nice senryu. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:48:00 PM

    Harry, a sad thought... hopefully it is only a senryu, i do not like the image of your heart all broken....pd

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:57:00 PM

    Harry, love it so much, I love writing sad poems, O, I wonder why? Constance

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:23:00 PM

    The pen holds all emotions happy or sad. Nicely done. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 11:20:00 AM

    Good one harry! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:20:00 AM

    And with each word you write your healing happens ;) gosh Harry I absolutely dig this write of yours. Hope you and your family are doing okay. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:59:00 AM

    wow, this one is so good, Harry

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:50:00 AM

    This one is too good my friend. Outstanding and brilliantly composed lines. A superb Haiku from your crafted pen and thank you for your continued interest in my series love story Tesu. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Harry Horsman

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:39:00 AM

    Keep holding and writing with that pen. Great poets are borne from great emotion. Wishing you the very best.

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 5:53:00 AM

    The pen might seem difficult to hold .... in sorrow. - BRAVO HARRY! - - Have a nice Sunday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 4:58:00 AM

    Hi Harry no one better to hold the pen, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:38:00 AM

    This is very emotional and heartbreaking. Giving a person so much power...Thanks for your lovely comments..you are the best! Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:36:00 AM

    A great Senryu here Harry!Love this.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:49:00 PM

    Can I giggle? The last line is superb!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:14:00 PM

    soupmail for ya

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Very deep Harry, very powerful. I enjoyed your Senryu a great deal. Have a wonderful day. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:35:00 PM

    pondering thoughts love this...

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:05:00 PM

    I LOVE this one. It's a perfectly crafted senryu!!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:49:00 AM

    Been there and lived that my friend... well expressed piece... Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Ahhh!!I hope not true..Great expressive work..I really like this one..Thanks for the review of my work..The one about the fisherman was strickly imagination..Sara

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:29:00 AM

    Nicely done Harry,my pen has never let me down, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:46:00 AM

    Masterpiece Harry! This one really touched my thoughts,deep one indeed my friend.Best wishes if for a contest!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:16:00 AM

    nice write Harry... best wishes

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:13:00 AM

    deep one harry xx

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:06:00 AM

    Quite thought provoking, Harry, nice effort!! Jag