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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:11:00 PM

    Yasmin, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 1:23:00 PM

    Hello Yasmin,,, you are a kind soul, this poem fits you...pd

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 11:11:00 AM

    Congratulations, sweet yasmin!! well deserved win.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:19:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Yasmin my friend another wonderful write xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 3:21:00 PM

    Here's my sweetie pie! Another form under your belt, I should make you head mistress while I'm gone..you know almost as many forms as I do now..go fly..teach little chickie! Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:54:00 AM

    Excellent refrain and awesome rondelet Yas...you nailed it just right. If you want to inquire about an elderly person's health, you say "Tamari tabiyat kevi che/ kem che?" for bye, say "aavjo" :)

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:41:00 PM

    peek a boo Yasmin

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:10:00 AM

    Well said yasmin. wonderful sentiment, graceful spirit. Awesome!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:00:00 PM

    a splendid title for this rondelet on humaneness. It's really well crafted, sweetie, and thanks for your "standing ovation" for my naughty poem. It took me a long time to write it but I sure enjoyed myself. I notice you used "grace" in this poem. that was one of the words I chose as well!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 4:56:00 PM

    I only wish all could be filled with kindness, great write :)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:15:00 PM

    a perfect bow is wrapped around this verse, Yas. Wonderful sentiments on human kindness...wish more would write on this subject matter. Right? Happy day!!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Hi Yasmin great words powerful lets hope people listen to you, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:43:00 AM

    lovely lines of grace on kindness theme Yasmin .. winning wishes to u luv .. a rare beauty ..

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Thanks for the lovely words in a lovely poem, Yasmin! - Have a nice Sunday. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:45:00 PM

    Yes, kindness is the grace God bestowed on us. Love it, Yasmin :)

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:05:00 PM

    nice write Yasmin

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 1:31:00 PM

    soup xx

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:56:00 PM

    You offering a hug for me Yasssss. Blushing Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:43:00 AM

    What a powerful and instinctual write my friend! I am so very impressed with the quality of this tremendous poem here Yasmin! You not only have found how to do a Rondelet but have mastered it in such a short period of time, very beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this delightfully kind poem this afternoon! What an awesome piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:15:00 AM

    You have such a way with words, beautiful Yasmin xx

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:49:00 AM

    well written Yasssssssss... Beautiful words my dear.... hugs n luv Michael