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Lost

Elly Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Lost which was written by poet Elly Wouterse. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lost

bottomless deep pits
universes without you 
stuck in the middle

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012


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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:34:00 PM
    Ellie, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/25/2012 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Soup mail >>>
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:01:00 PM
    another sad one with interesting imagery. Well, I sure enjoy going through haiku series! thanks for the read.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 2:47:00 PM
    Ellie, wow... good image ... love it the way it is...deep the way you intended ... one of the best haiku I've read today...take care LINDA

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/7/2012 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    After Debbi's message I changed a little bit......And now your comment......... WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW TY so much......... so much LoL Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:50:00 PM
    [I see you/ in the distance-- silent weeping] give us a concret image..join 2 of the lines Light & Love

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/7/2012 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I did - I guess...........
    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/7/2012 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    soup mail.