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Vast

Elly Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Vast which was written by poet Elly Wouterse. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Vast

light travels slower
space shuttles and plains like snails
seconds are ages

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 2012

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:22:00 PM
    haiku is a process and a prayer ;) keep at it the joy is in the trying [stay with 1 subject & one action..& a surprise! that line 3 surprise is the hardest part]...Light & Love

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/8/2012 12:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'll connect later today... for sure!!! Means a LOT to me. Soupmail later today..... cu Ellie Daphne......
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 2:48:00 PM
    Ellie, another good haiku..pd

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 12/7/2012 2:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome third comment of yours. Was an awesome experience 'translating' what the world surrounding me' inspired me to write.. TY x 3 :-) Ellie Daphne