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His Hands

His hands are mesmerizing;
They move with easy grace.
With wide palms and long fingers,
He stirs this breathless place.
 
His melody is haunting;
It strikes my deepest chord.
His hands pluck at my heartstrings,
Touch regions unexplored.

I can't help but imagine
Just how those hands would feel
Playing tunes against my skin -
A world of notes unsealed.

He concentrates so deeply, 
Immersed in making art.  
And here I sit - Pathetic!
Jealous of a damned guitar!

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  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:27:00 AM

    this one pulls the right strings too.

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 3:33:00 AM

    there are some guitar playing hands over here jealous of how well your hands pen words..enjoyed this.. thanks.

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:32:00 PM

    Nice to read your write this eve, Heather. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Love this Heather!

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 10:01:00 PM

    Heather, congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed"..lol... always~ PD.....

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:38:00 PM

    i sure remember this gorgeous poem and I'd have placed it even higher on this particular winners list. Anyway, Congratulations, Heather!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 4:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Heather love xx

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:59:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading this one..Got a chuckle..I am glad that I stopped by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:58:00 PM

    ha ha ha ,great write Heather

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:46:00 PM

    LOL, nice twist at the end. Love this poem. Very witty.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 3:36:00 PM

    Lovely write Heather! It's always appealing to see someone passionate in his undertakings, but it can take its toll on your senses - well penned.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:10:00 AM

    Very nice , had me pulled in from beginning ... cool images... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Love the twist at the end! I can imagine him and his hands :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:11:00 PM

    oh wow, another awesome poem from you, KEEP them coming. I just love how this ended with you wishing the hands were on YOU and not the guitar!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 2:53:00 PM

    xox~ pd