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tanka in the still night contest

in the still of night when the room is very cold only sound your breaths the thought enters my silence how strange it would be alone
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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:01:00 AM

    an intense thought Sara .. wonderful expression for contest luv .. much success ..

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:02:00 PM

    thoughts in the still of the night. I like that!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:46:00 PM

    The thought enters my head almost ever night, Sandra. I feel with you. Lovely piece. Thanks for sharing it.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:52:00 PM

    Wow, what a deep thought my friend! I truly loved the thought provoking presence of this delightful piece! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a pleasant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 2:54:00 PM

    Sara, good luck in Susan's contest... deep...pd