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Why is Jack so Happy

I have many questions
I want to ask you Jack
I'll place them in a poem
In hopes you'll answer back

Why are you so happy?
We're all dieing to know
It seem so unnatural 
Where did your sadness go?

Is it something you smoke
from your own special pipe?
Or are you just really
a happy go lucky type?

These are all my questions
I hope you don't hold back
Give me all your answers
While I go prepare a snack

It was suggested that jack and I do a poem together, I thought I would
get the ball rolling. Thanks for the idea Shaz, curious where it will lead.

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:08:00 PM

    If you are talking about jack horne, I agree. he is such a cheerful fellow!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/8/2012 1:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes one and the same
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:07:00 AM

    this is really good, is it a dedication poem? anyhow i like what i read, and jack a splended poet.. so can't wait for jack's answer...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/8/2012 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yep dedicated to a happy guy.
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 1:45:00 AM

    Tnks for sharing this rhyme with us

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/8/2012 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your welcome Charma.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:31:00 PM

    :) I enjoyed reading this taunt. I hope he responds. Lovely poem.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 9:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Eileen
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:20:00 PM

    should be a hoot.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Oh.....Good on you for tempting Jack to come play poetry with you....LOL. I so look forward to his reply - like many - I'm sure - Shaz

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:12:00 PM

    What Jack are you talking about?? About your poem: If this is Jack Ellis, i hope he responds... I read his recent poem ... take care...LINDA

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope he does as well, I think we could have some fun.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:12:00 PM

    Because he called "Happy Jack" - and have a good life. :) (I have already asked him) - Well written to a happy friend. - I wish you a lovely and relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:08:00 PM

    haha, I can't wait to see where this goes!! :) Great start!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me too!
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:06:00 AM

    You always make a new innovative way to develop your ability in writing, this must be challenging, way to go Richard! Richard, I finished mine, have a check :D

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will be over shortly to read it. Thanks for your visit.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:48:00 AM

    Hi Richard, I sure do enjoy your writes, and as you, interested in seeing where this goes. Rollo

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Rollo you are very kind.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:24:00 AM

    With two versatile poets such as you and Jack, I am sure you'll do great, your always an interesting read, have a great day Richard, Rose xxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/7/2012 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks, should I call you Mystic or Rose???
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:46:00 AM

    Ugh! The Question Man has spoken! Should be a nice deal between our famous witty spirits from the Faternity of the Bearded Poets! Love this! Waiting for Jack, then! (Bad mean tone) (^_^) Blessings, Hanitra