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Santa

Santa scurried
Down our chimney
At the bottom
Lost his wind he
Took long puff
From his inhaler
Popped three buttons
Needs a tailer
And although
He's acrobatic
Now he's also
An ashmatic

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 10:21:00 PM

    rereading this one. Sure like it!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/14/2012 9:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:54:00 AM

    good golly Jon. I can't get enough.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/14/2012 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are too kind. Thank you.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:29:00 PM

    very good one. and I like how the lines line up going down like a chimney!!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/8/2012 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:52:00 PM

    Poor Santa! Life can be tough. Lovely piece! Hugs!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/7/2012 10:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Eileen
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Sending you a big smile for your poem, Jon. - Wish you a nice relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/7/2012 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And a big smile for you too. :) Thank you Anne Lise
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:36:00 AM

    Hehe..tnks for the chuckle B-)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/7/2012 10:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for stopping by to read my poem.
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:12:00 AM

    ha! this HAS to be read aloud to appreciate just how clever it really is!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 12/7/2012 10:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ilene.