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Dreams

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            You took me into your world through my dreams, I appreciate. Tonight
              we were on a boat, floating on an electric blue lake. All these places
                I get to visit, so serene, visions to be seen. People floating by in
                   little tiny boats, just like you and me. I wonder if they were
                     coming or going, only you will ever know. I’m glad you
                          took me there tonight, where else can we go?


©Holly P. Moore
   December 2012

Dedicated to my beloved son, Joshua

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  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Dear Holly - such a beautiful dream and beautiful poem. love, Kathy P.S. Soup mail

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:31:00 AM

    Holly this might sound odd, but I find this a very elegant poem visually with beautiful words... I see what you meant in your soup...David

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:05:00 PM

    What a lovely poem, Holly. Reading through it was like a little trip of it's own to a pleasant place. Thanks so much for sharing. I enjoyed it!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 12/7/2012 9:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry for that mistake...trip of its own (no contraction) Hee hee. that's what you get when you type quickly !
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:16:00 AM

    i read your comment on jon's poem so i know the background to this poem, which made it so much more poignant to me. even without knowing anything about joshua, this is a beautiful poem...

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:47:00 AM

    What en enjoyable poem. I love how you constructed it. JOSHUA? Is that your dream boat? i.e. boyfriend. Very witty.