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Lady in the Water

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Lady in the Water

elongated shimmers reflect
 the water of movement
 on her face,
 
life swirls around
 brushing past
 
unseeing
 
she stares into liquid pools of light
 blinded as a supernova
 peeks out from inside

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  1. Date: 2/5/2014 8:33:00 AM
    haunting free verse! a watery death and a rising! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 4:55:00 AM
    thanks for the comments ladies they were much appeciated hugs Jayne

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:14:00 AM
    A good poem Jayne ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:08:00 AM
    Very nice, Jayne. It is so good to read your poetry again. hugs, Catie :) soupmail :)