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A Road Still Driven

Fear erodes my heart as darkness pervades my senses. Of all the paths I could have chosen, I chose to chase an elusive reality steeped in a malignant illusion. Good and evil Black and white Right and wrong Light and darkness Those are the choices I was born with and I took them to heart. Two trees, one a rose bush, one a wild bush. Too young to form an opinion; too afraid to stray towards the wild bush; I trusted them when they said the rose bush is the only viable path. But then I grew older and I began dissecting the rose bush. Thorns pricked my hands as caterpillars obstructed my views. I saw them – all the leaves that had been chewed. All the leaves that were filled with flaws. All the leaves that had fallen off. And my trust broke. They should have taught me how to love, then I would have been able to forgive. Now I’m left with questions – can a flawed leaf be part of a perfect tree? Will the caterpillars finish off the bush before it is saved? If a leaf falls off does another grow in its place? If another grows in its place does that mean the leaves are replaceable? What if another does not grow, does it mean the rose bush is not whole? If the bush is not whole will the other leaves wonder where the others went to? Will they feel a void? Or will they continue their life in bliss? And if they continue their life in bliss, does this mean that none of the leaves are important? In other words does it mean that human beings are irrelevant entities? These are the questions running through my head. Wrecking havoc inside my brain. For a certainty I know that the rose bush is the right path. But my mind cannot reconcile the thought of the vanity of life with the thought of a purposeful life. To mean nothing and to mean something at the same time; to be loved and be a non entity all at once – That is what my lowly brain cannot grasp. This is my road still driven, this is the path I take to try and search for answers. A journey stipulated in impossibility. A concrete dream set in an elusive reality. And it tears me apart because it separates me from the ones I love. It’s all or nothing – that is my stance. Until the day the road leads me to a convergence where the dream and the reality harmoniously entwine. A destination without which my existence slowly fades away. Sorry, for those who do not understand.

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  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 12:37:00 AM

    Vicky, I believe it would be safe to say you are often deep within yourself pulling out thoughts that carry such a weight, they cannot be ignored, in this way, I can relate to you as a human being, and I thank you for sharing your words. X regards, and peace Ruby

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Congratulations to you! I especially like the title of your poem and many of the creative phrases. - Gail

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:53:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win...I think "to mean nothing and to mean something at the same time"...there are going to be some people in your corner and some outside of it. But, you always have your self-worth. Don't let anyone take that away from you...I had to come back and make this a fav..Thanks for your comments....Hugs, Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:35:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Michael's "A Road Still Driven" contest Vicky. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:40:00 PM

    Another great win. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:54:00 PM

    Such a strong entry filled with awesome emotion and descriptions...glad to see u won and that Michael has a first place prize en route to U! Great effort, Vicky. Congrats. gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:29:00 PM

    Hello Vicky, I just returned from post office and your 1st place prize is en route to you. Please just message me here to let me know when you receive it. Again an amazing piece And I have a new contest up as well hope to read you again. Hugs from me to u. Xxx

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 1/3/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Michael, I have been engrossed in your captivating book and I just have to tell you, you are an inspiration. Thank you for this precious gift and do keep on writing.
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 5:55:00 PM

    I like how we both did lyrical poems in the contest, great minds think alike ;) Vicky, words cannot describe how beautiful, thoughtful, well written and overall perfect this poem is. Much congrats to you!!!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:23:00 PM

    I am so happy for your win! I thought I had left a congrats earlier but it is no where to be found. I am proud of you, a well deserved win!!!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 2:33:00 PM

    An amazing profound write Vicky! Congrats on your awesome win! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 12:49:00 PM

    Philosophical, beautifully written!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 10:02:00 AM

    congrads on your win Vicky..thank you for writing in...a hearty congrads on all your stupendous wins...take care..

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 5:35:00 AM

    excellent write my friend Vicky...congratulations!! cheers!!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:11:00 AM

    A super place for a super write congratulations Vicky love xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:12:00 PM

    Vicky, it is nice to see you on Michael's winning list... a warm congratulations and good night~:-) PD

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Excellent write Vicky, congrats on a surreal beautiful verse, xxx Rose

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:19:00 PM

    Congrats on your big win Vicky, they are really a deep poem and I love it :D - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:12:00 PM

    Lovely lyric poem Vicky, all are nothing makes you ignore all the grays, no problem, wonderful!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:04:00 PM

    You are a rising star! Keep shining! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 4:12:00 PM

    I knew when I read this it would be a winner!!! Congratulations, you are an awesome writer! :D

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:53:00 PM

    Congrats on 1st place in my contest and the prize is a signed copy of my latest poetry book... soup mail me destination it is to be sent.. And thank you for such an amazing piece!!!!!

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/11/2012 2:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for my placement Michael!
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:49:00 AM

    Wow this is so beautiful Vicky... I'm in awe. I feel ashamed about my simple entry now.. this is really deep.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:37:00 AM

    what is beneficial is considered as good and non beneficial is bad. Conscience depicts the truth but choice is left to us. Nice poem enjoyed, my genius friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:44:00 PM

    ‡ 'Take It From Her.' The Sheep Of My Pasture; My Baby Girl! ˜ Got No Worries, Got No Cares, For, 'I AM, The Resurrection.' ˜ Matthew, 11:28-30 & John, 16:33 ˜ You Have A Very Deep Heart. And I Have Expressed Your Wonderful Qualities As My Admirations ˜ Secular Light Heavenly Light Worldly Wisdom Divine Wisdom; Treasures, And Rust ? Thank You, For Your Kind Lovely Visit! Wonderful Glimpse In Someone Beautiful's Painting Here ˜ 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:32:00 PM

    ‡ Can I Go Outside And, Playyyy ˜ There's Too Much Serious Conversation Going On And I Just Want To Play With My Marrrbbllesss, LOL. Hey There, Sweet Beautiful Vicky ˜ Thought I Would Try And Inject A Bit Of Something A Tad Brighter Or I Should Say Lighter, Into This Searchfuls Heavy Moment In Refection Of Your Precious Heart's ˜ Once 'Christ' Said To Mary's Sister, 'Martha Martha, You Worry And Are Concerned About Too Many Things ? You Sister Mary Has Found What Matters Most, And I Shall Not' ˜

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/10/2012 1:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your words have a lot of truth in them. I like that!
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 12:58:00 PM

    Vicki if you feel inspired by the rondelet form do as makes you happy. Have a great day. Light & Love

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/9/2012 1:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'll try, thanks.
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:28:00 AM

    I had to comment again...your words put so many thoughts to ponder in people's minds..that you can not just walk away from your work untouched. It leaves you breathless with wonderment...xxoo Holly

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:23:00 AM

    "where the dream and the reality harmoniously entwine"...I don't know if I will even be alive for that to happen. I miss you! I SM you, but never got a response. Are you ok? I was worried. I usually hear from you very often...xxoo Holly Moore

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/9/2012 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Holly, I'm fine, thanks for your concern. Take care.
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:03:00 PM

    Hi Vicky, read my response to your response. Good night. Big Hug!

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 12/9/2012 12:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it is totally amazing.
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