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Jungle by night

Jungle by night

In the far jungle
The big bear of darkness lay
Crouched all night on leafy ground.

It glared through eyes of
Oil lamps of far away huts.
When dawn came, it slunk away.

07/Dec/12
Form: Personification in Form ‘Sedoka’( Sylls: 5-7-7, 5-7-7 )

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

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  1. Date: 12/22/2012 9:44:00 AM

    This tickles the kid in me...I see a bear being entertained by the elements of civilization...then, as the morning comes, it's back to his own kind! Nice one, Jag. I missed reading your work...glad I stopped over to read some today! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:23:00 PM

    Jag, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:11:00 AM

    (Glad I'm not there .... in the Jungle) - Great poem, Jag! - Wishing you a relaxed and pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:58:00 AM

    very amazing Jag , enjoyed your nice share...may your day be merry and joy <3<3<3 SK