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All That Sparkles

All That Sparkles A baby’s eyes that is just born Looks into the world as a new soul Creates a sparkle never to be gone Radiates life to someone old A canopy of stars rests up above Illuminating our world below Creates sparkles out of their treasure trove One that sends us all a peaceful glow A blanket of snowflakes one by one Cascade down so magically from the sky Their mission, when reaching the earth is done Will reveal a white blanket of sparkles that will keep us warm and dry

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:15:00 PM

    I can attest to these beautiful words u have written Gail as we gaze into our new grandson's eyes each day .. a majestic poem so uplifting luv ..

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 3:05:00 PM

    love your poem, Gail, and love your positivity, you are such a joy to read...

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:22:00 PM

    Gail, you have written a lovely rhyme, so visual and beautiful, well done. Constance

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:34:00 AM

    beautiful Gail love xx

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:29:00 AM

    Hi Gail, very vivid imagery in this one contrasting from baby to snowflakes, very well done, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Gail; you have painted a perfect picture with this poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 8:14:00 PM

    hi Gail, this is really a great read, and full of imagery. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 5:37:00 PM

    beautiful..pd

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 2:31:00 PM

    What could be more beautiful ..... Thanks for the beautiful poem Gail. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/6/2012 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aw thanks Anne for enjoying my poem and its so nice to see you here on the soup. Have a wonderful night. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 2:28:00 PM

    This is quite the marvelous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and wondrous poem this afternoon! A very pleasant piece this one is, Great Work!!