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SUNSHINE AND HONEYDEW

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SUNSHINE AND HONEYDEW

SUNSHINE AND HONEYDEW 

Each night, velvety and long
Longed the dew  ,for the fire
In her fervent lover,Sunshine
Yearned the dew
in all  quarts of moon
For that seven tiered arch,
that reached from above
deep and through the thickets.

First kiss of dawn
sunshine sprawled all over
fulfilled, satiated,
And honeydew is no more. 
Consummation, unto bliss.
real and  eternal
Sunshine and honeydew
Fire and Ice.



Mehnaz Veetil
for the contest,Fire and Ice

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  1. Date: 1/5/2014 9:25:00 PM
    Mehnaz.... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 8:35:00 AM
    Very passionate poem. I am glad I took the time to read it.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard....
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Mehnaz! love/hugs, LG

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Leonara
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 3:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Mehnaz xx

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy..
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:45:00 AM
    Congratulations my friend Mehnaz on your lovely win. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Maria...
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:13:00 AM
    I LOVE your poem........... it's 'thinking out of the box' related to the theme. Choice of moment - fabulous Words painting what YOU saw. Felicitations :-) Ellie Daphne

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ellie , for your kind words.... love,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:43:00 PM
    MEHNAZ, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You ,PD...
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:00:00 PM
    Nice imagery! Congrats for your win, Mehnaz.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You , Andrea
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Mehnaz. Love, Carol

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/25/2012 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol, for your kind words....love ,Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:06:00 PM
    Mehnaz, love this,,, the mix is awesome... thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Looking forward to reading more of your poems tonight. Always~ & Forever ;-) PD

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/14/2012 5:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for stopping by...I am amazed how flawlessly you frame your writings...love to read more from you. Love, Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:18:00 PM
    great write Mehnaz,best of luck

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/14/2012 5:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THank You for the wish ...Mehnaz
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:56:00 PM
    Good contest entry keep them coming! Light & Love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 12/5/2012 7:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie,you inspire a lot...Thanks for stopping by. love Mehnaz