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The Betrayal

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The Betrayal

You said you loved me
showed me affection and passion,
but here I am yearning for a relationship,
yet you struggle in an attempt
to taste the flame of my inner soul,
whilst I cherish all that, that is sacred.
Your insensitive scorn is an abomination
when you took my innocence
like that of a tender bloom and fed me
a hurricane of hate
those that bamboozle one’s head,
stabs at a lonely heart.

© Harry J Horsman 2012 

For Delilah Ventura's Dictionary fun #1 Contest
all fifteen selected words used

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  1. Date: 12/31/2012 3:47:00 PM

    soup

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:24:00 PM

    very very good poem imma rate this a 7 it can be hard to trust some ppl these days good job :-)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Excellently penned the reality of betrayal. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 9:37:00 AM

    I really have a distaste for the person that did this....it is really a powerful poem! Thanks for your comments on my page..very encouraging..xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:47:00 PM

    Seems we have this disappointment in common Harry; a great selection of words to describe that detestable state. I love these kinds of poems and you did a great job on it! A great entry for the contest with my best wishes. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:41:00 AM

    This is going to be added to my list of favorite poems to say the least. Wow, amazing, AMAZING write

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:37:00 AM

    Nowadays love, real whacko, they only try to taste one's inner soul, depress one and run away...... I can really see treason in the face of that lover, though, he showed affection and passion Nice write!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:45:00 AM

    Very nice, Harry... a difficult task well mastered... good luck... Terry

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:59:00 AM

    Quite a strong write on Love and Hate that too when you have selected words to use. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes .........Ravindra K

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:02:00 AM

    soup

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:29:00 PM

    Harry lovely penned words... Good luck in the contest I'm routing for u... Carma

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 4:40:00 PM

    nicely penned Harry...best wishes

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 3:56:00 PM

    Harry; This is sad, but good. It hurts, time heals everything. Smile and good luck in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:25:00 PM

    i recently encountered this kind of cruelty. and a week ago she have the nerve to ask me to take her out to dinner. i learned my lesson get paid first.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Harry, your poem is outstanding, so difficult to use someone else's words, but you did and did it well, best of luck in the contest. Constance

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 12:49:00 PM

    Great work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon a very expressive and emotive work..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by..Winning quality work for sure..Sara

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:58:00 AM

    Excellent work here for the contest. A tough job this was really. a sure winner in this poem.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:10:00 AM

    I dont follow contests that much dear but i love the story.you transmitted here ..it carries such emotion.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:48:00 AM

    Well done Harry. Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 5:10:00 AM

    Harry brilliantly crafted poem, this should do really well..David

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:37:00 AM

    You have done well with this harry it was an interesting choice of words she used and you in turn have used them well xx

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:28:00 AM

    Very nice! I wouldn't have known it was for that contest until I got to Bamboozled.This is the second poem I've read for that contest that had me in awe of the well placed wording.Great job! :o)

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:24:00 AM

    I like it Harry, good job.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:34:00 PM

    Passion speaks, enjoyed your verse Harry, Rose xxx

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:00:00 PM

    Harry, you penned beautifully a painful heart here in this poem. Wounds of the heart will bleed unless cared for. Loved your poem Harry. Hugs and love Gail

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:35:00 PM

    YOu did really well with these words of Dalilah's, harry. I struggled a bit and then got going. I think you incorporated them just right. It was an interesting challenge, don't you think?

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:33:00 PM

    first to respond to what you commented on the yellow rose. I wrote that a long time ago for my poetry mentor I met in 2001 when I was starting out. She was such a good friend until one day she decided to quit poetry and return to her painting. I never heard from her again. a very strange thing to do and I will never understand that a best friend could do that to his/her friend!