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haiku 28

soft thick moss
covers the fallen trunk --
drizzle falls

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 1:54:00 AM

    Wow wow and wow! You capture the moment like a Japanese master of haiku, here! Can I post it on my short poetry blog: fryktorein.blogspot.gr?

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Ah! Lovely! Cynthia

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:49:00 PM

    Lovely snapshot, here. Hmmm... I wonder what the word spongey would do here? :) I was thinking that soft and thick is spongey and then against the drizzle? Hey, I just read a haiku by Kash that left me weak, seriously. Please, give it a visit, when you can. I think its beyond awesome. I think its GENIUS. Tell me what you think. Hugs, Cyndi oh, the haiku is called after my prayer. What floored me, moved me, was the zen of now held in layers of time. STUNNING.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:21:00 PM

    love this one, Debs. LOL, OK, I'll make the croc poem a nature one : )

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:58:00 AM

    Two in one. Lovely penned. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 12:37:00 PM

    The words come off the page..beautifully written...Thanks for your comments on my page...Hugs, Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:40:00 PM

    Nice to have rain instead of all this snow. My poem fool's game is just from the top of my head. Needed to write something different instead of a nature theme. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:12:00 PM

    The queen of Ku delivers another great one! I describes the weather we have here for two weeks and I'm craving a bit of sun. Depresses me beautifully! :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 3:43:00 PM

    like this,,, very much

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:41:00 AM

    you've captured it in time forever. No photo can do this justice, only the real thing.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:18:00 PM

    Debbie, I love this haiku, so utterly visual and peaceful. Constance

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:55:00 AM

    I can envision this beauty ma..Miss you.too.My hands are full with my little one yet its so.nice being here..big hug

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:22:00 AM

    So visual Debbie. I can almost hear the rain, smell the dampness in the air and see the bright green moss on the darkened wet trunk laying on the ground. A great write. Warm smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:06:00 AM

    very cool my friend....David

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:36:00 AM

    lovely haiku Debbie. always a pleasure reading your haiku filled with such lovely imagery.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 3:48:00 AM

    Keeping that moss alive..I like the beautiful moss for it is such a wonderful shade of green..Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:21:00 PM

    Visions of cottage country in the fall. Nice haiku.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:12:00 PM

    A portrait of lushness. A picture I won't see around here until summer returns. Well done.