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To the girl in the corner :

With unmemorable face
and mediocre looks.
No catwalk. A shuffle her pace.
Unlikely to catch,with those plain  hooks.

The mirror deceives.
Glass designed to
crack esteem.
The glorified assembly line
product,
the perception of
perfection,
your adversary.

March away from the
corner
towards that door
where destiny waits
to enter.

After all, the meek shall inherit the earth.

Matthew 5:5 "Blessed are the meek, for they shall inherit the earth" - Jesus


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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Happy hoildays. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 10:00:00 AM

    Congratulationd on your win Yvette:-)

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:39:00 AM

    Congrats on your winning spot Yvette love xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:16:00 PM

    Yvette, Congratulations with your winning poem... always~PD

    Ndlovu Avatar Yvette Lisa Ndlovu Date: 12/11/2012 12:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much for the support!
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:59:00 PM

    Yvette, well worth the first place in Frank's contest--no catwalk--a shuffle her pace--Love it!

    Ndlovu Avatar Yvette Lisa Ndlovu Date: 12/11/2012 12:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks appreciate it!
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 7:30:00 PM

    Congratulations on your1st place win in my contest!

    Ndlovu Avatar Yvette Lisa Ndlovu Date: 12/11/2012 12:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Very profound message you deliver here, I agree, the glossy perception of good looks can be a daunting task for any woman, but when she walks out in all her beauty and authenticity, watch out world here she comes, take care my dear and keep writing, it has real depth and beauty, blessings from Rose xxx

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 7:25:00 AM

    This is such a great and outstanding verse/poem which I enjoyed reading my dear friend, Yvette! Thank you so much for sharing and your wonderful comments on my poem! Have a wonderful day! love and hugs, Leonora