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SHOPPING TIME - PLASTIC CARD

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SHOPPING TIME - PLASTIC CARD


                                                     First time ....
                                               Back in the pocket
                                                The second time ....
                                                    Up in the bag
                                                     Third time ....
                                             Starting to feel the heat
                                                   Fourth time ....
                                               Down in the handbag
                                                    The fifth time ....
                                                     I'm a little tired
                                                       Sixth time ....
                                             Once again into the pocket
                                                      Seventh time .....
                                                  I soon start to glow
                                                       Eigth time ....
                                            Once again into the handbag
                                                        Ninth time ....
                                                   Now I'm really hot
                                                  Tenth time .... (Phu...)
                                                    Now I am: EMPTY !
                                         There are busy times for "plastic card"





05.12.2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 4:05:00 PM
    A pleasure to read your work this evening. Light & Love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/12/2013 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 3:21:00 AM
    This is very cute, and true ;} Have a blessed New Years Anne xoxo ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/5/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/30/2012 4:11:00 PM
    hee hee hee hee..u gave that plastic card an incredible work out, Anne Lise! Wishing u and Arild a very awesome New Yr and lots of new poems to share! Love and prayers always, gwendolen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/31/2012 3:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Gwen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/21/2012 3:20:00 AM
    plastic cards are surely buzzing, money burning on the line, stand back little cuzzin, dollars gone and it was mine :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/21/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Don. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Great read... I've solved that problem... If I don't have the cash... I don't go shopping. This year the TV broke down so my Hubby is doing the shopping (for the new TV) for one big family gift... Actually it'll be a small TV, but it'll give a lot of family time, no matter the size. LOL...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/18/2012 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 5:45:00 AM
    Hi Anne Lise - Very unique! Love this. Happy Holidays and taking for visiting my poetry. - Love to you, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/17/2012 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 6:47:00 AM
    very well written for all 'plastic' users during holiday spending time Anne-Lise .. my hubby is secretly storing mine away ..haha .. but he forgot about online cybershopping ...oh .. was so happy to read your comment inspired Craig for next theme for his contest .. great how we inspire each other luv ..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/9/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot Linda-Marie, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:08:00 AM
    I think this poem is very clever. Well done.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2012 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:00:00 AM
    :) Enjoy the shopping Anne-lise, yearly exercise for the little plastic card too!UK54

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2012 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:14:00 PM
    I like your take on the expression "money burning a hole in your pocket" With plastic it's a lot harder to see until you get the bill.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/8/2012 2:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:34:00 PM
    Hi Anne Lise great take on spending like it, have a great weekend, all the best Owen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 1:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:45:00 AM
    That's clever. It will burn a hole in your pocket or your purse! Thanks for your comments on my poem...Hugs, Holly

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments Holly....lol. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:56:00 AM
    That's a lot to put on a poor old plastic card. Enjoyed mucho. daver

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:19:00 AM
    Funny write but really hits home at the time of the year! Loved it... hugs, Jack xox

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 5:39:00 AM
    i always think about the ones at the other end of the transaction, waiting there like Oliver Twist, "Please can i have more" a gem of a poem is this, the theme is today, and that like this poem is awesome....

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments Harry. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:50:00 AM
    can I come shopping with you , your card gets more use than mine lol xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 5:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ...My is empty !!! Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:25:00 AM
    Very interesting, Anne, way to go!! Jag

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 1:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:50:00 PM
    This is really creative poem Anne, Christmas is the time when the plastic card in action, but becareful for the burnt bill :D

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 4:04:00 PM
    Anne-Lise back for a re-read because my plastic is now on meltdown.....David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2012 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol.... thank you for re-read,David. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 12:20:00 PM
    You know what/ i agree with you and now is the time. have a nice day. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/6/2012 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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