I Belong to You, Lord by Gwendolen R.

I Belong to You, Lord

Approaching darkness Sips from my soul Peeks into crevices Freezes joy A heightened awareness Suffocates my thoughts Paralyzes the heart song Placed there as a child A ratta tatta tatta Cerebral noise Unable to change the tune of my existence I belong to you, Lord Your effervescent love I reject this hatred molesting my song Draw my mind’s eye back towards you Beckon your angels to comfort me through This storm Written for Nette Onclaud's Contest--Synesthesia: Inner Body Movement


Sean L Sanders Date: 1/30/2013 9:10:00 AM Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.
Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs Date: 12/21/2012 3:32:00 PM Good job Gwen, keepbup the good work:)
David Williams Date: 12/10/2012 10:33:00 AM Gwen, oh yes, just outstanding, me likes a lot...David
Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 12/9/2012 2:34:00 PM Powerful write here Gwendolen.Ìnspirational lines,blessed by your very creative pen:) Have a great new week over there! Arild
Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/9/2012 1:42:00 PM Oh yes, His love eternal, Your poem heaven-provoking!
kash poet Date: 12/9/2012 12:49:00 PM Very nice Gwendolena!Love this!!
Wilma Neels Date: 12/9/2012 9:11:00 AM Gwen, I absolutely love this inspiring write of yours. How are you doing? Love Wilma
harry horsman Date: 12/8/2012 10:39:00 AM amazingly inspiring, and a joy to read this positive poem...
Yesha Shah Date: 12/6/2012 11:02:00 AM powerful write this Gwen. wonderful entry on the theme of the contest. good luck to you with this.
The Situation Date: 12/6/2012 9:05:00 AM Unable to change the tune. That's the line that realy said I belong to you Lord.
Lucilla Carrillo Date: 12/5/2012 10:05:00 PM This is very beautiful. it's like you are talking to God. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla
SCRIBE ML Date: 12/5/2012 6:49:00 PM I like this a lot! Every line is packed with a punch. "Hatred molesting my song", brilliant! That alone will get a winning spot....Good Luck!
Russell Sivey Date: 12/5/2012 4:09:00 PM This is a beautiful, quite the gorgeous write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading every line of this incredible and wondrous poem this evening! What a fabulous and powerful piece, Great Work!!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/5/2012 2:49:00 PM very interesting the contrast here of being in tune with God but being bothered by hatred. I never tried this particular challenge but I am sure reading some good ones like this one.
Constance La France Date: 12/5/2012 1:36:00 PM Gwen, this is an emotional and powerfully written poem. I really enjoyed reading it, best of luck in the contest. Constance

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I Belong to You, Lord

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