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A Mirage

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A Mirage

I look with scorn 
at this abomination;
Bringing to light a passion,
an angry flame

Fueling a yearning 
I struggle again and again;
A relationship we attempt,
With bright affection 

I taste your  tender inner soul, 
Colorful bloom I cherish you;
Oh, but you Bamboozle me! 
A mirage, brought on by snow

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  1. Date: 1/3/2013 2:33:00 PM
    Like a conjurer you brought out the essence at the last moment, lovely write.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Congrats Melani...Seren

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your HM Melani xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 12:34:00 AM
    Very cleverly done Melani! I like how you've brought out the deceit, a mirage. Well done!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:46:00 PM
    M U,... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD