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Desire

I was eagerly searching for an affection that  i could cherish
Make all the days of my life full of passion
The flame and taste of this nature
Could not stop me from yearning from your inner soul
But unfortunately i was tender and could not taste well your love
As i struggled to attempt i really felt bamboozled
The bloom of my action seemed an abomination
So i ended up dejected hopeless and felt scorned.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:53:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Jacob. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup, you'll find a friendly group of folks here! One heck of an entry write there. Please do enter my contests, direction are in my blog. Light & Love