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through bare willow limbs

through bare willow limbs on this cold cloudy fall morn.. one star twinkles bright

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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 4:00:00 PM

    Very good Sara. I like it. I think we saw the same star. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:03:00 AM

    this is a superb haiku Sara. really loved it.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 10:35:00 AM

    My favorite tree. I just only now decided.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:13:00 PM

    Sara, i tried another haiku... wish i could think of them like this... oh well... glad the haiku i tried, was allowed on braking the rules.... love this view...always~PD

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:03:00 PM

    nice write Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:29:00 PM

    VERY NICE Sara ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:45:00 PM

    a lovely image you painted!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Lovely Haiku, Sara. - Few words becomes a beautiful poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:13:00 PM

    Sara, a lovely haiku, you have captured the essence of haiku very well. Constance

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:56:00 PM

    Hi Sara, this is truly a great write my friend. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Wow Sara, you have nailed the center of a grand feeling with this write! Or is is the middle of several feelings in one! This is so beautiful my friend, I can't put it into words how gorgeous and sentimental this poem really is. I will keep this one in my heart with me! I love it immensely! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:32:00 AM

    You have a great memory Sara. I think somewhere in my files I have a poem on the same subject. The funny story on Daddy has been told by all of his kids. But this is a brand new poem and not a repeat. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 8:02:00 AM

    beautiful Sara, I can just see this xx

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:24:00 AM

    Ah, I like this one a lot Sara. Beautiful