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Fire and Ice

Fire electrifies to give light Ice is all about cool delight Fire is the color red Ice, transparent spread Ice melts in fiery warmth Fire tamed when ice conforms Fire is flammable Ice is sculptible Ice caps on mountain peaks Raging forest fires havoc wreaks A lightening strike is nature's ire A hailstorm puts everything haywire Red molten lava of earthquake virgin white crystalline snowflake Fire and ice, two entities Each with unique complexities. yasmin khan.05/12/2012 Fire and Ice contest For Carol.

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  1. Date: 1/21/2013 9:01:00 AM

    They both do have very unique, very different complexities from each other! You did a perfect job depicting that! I love this, and I also see it won, naturally ;) very nice my darling

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:12:00 PM

    it's melting it's heating up... reading this wonderful poem once again... love the mystery behind both....pd

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Yasmin! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Yasmin Love, well deserved xx

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:34:00 AM

    Congratulations my friend Yasmin on your fantastic win. I like your poem. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria (^_^)

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 9:54:00 PM

    I love the way you contrast fire and ice "Each with unique complexities". I see from the comments that it was on a winning list. I can see why. It is a great poem.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Yasmin, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 4:42:00 PM

    hey, I somehow missed this one, sweetie . Very nicely done and now I am seeing it on this winners' list. Big congrats to you. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:47:00 PM

    Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:55:00 AM

    Beautiful, this write is full of beauty and has quite a gorgeousness to it! I just love the incredible wonder of the fire and ice you portray within your delightful poem! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:22:00 AM

    Such an apt and powerful description of these two fierce elements Yas. Great words spring from your pen dear. Good luck with this entry in the contest.