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Being in love

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Being in love

we are now together
we exchanged our heart
with each other
we truly love
one another
with patience and little fear...
but O my dear..
are we here..? 
I think no...
I too am burning
in the same fire
I am just learning
the way to love, from you
and I am not a liar
we are in love
and out of this world
far away from loneliness
even though we live
among people of mind curled
I am preparing myself
to fulfil all your needs
you don't know yourself
that I am feeing guilty
for all my bad deeds
my deeds that hurt you
that brought tears in your eyes
but O my dear! I love you
and for you I can even wait
sitting up above the SKIES

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 5:32:00 PM
    Vishal Kumar,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:43:00 AM
    Lovely written Vishal, it's a great feeling to be in love. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Kumar Avatar Vishal Kumar
    Date: 12/5/2012 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/5/2012 2:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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