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Did they remove the magic wand

Seren Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Did they remove the magic wand

Who took the M out of magic
The A followed close behind
G didnt want to be left alone
I and  C says, please be kind

Can we not stick together
Why have we drifted away
Why aren't we enjoying christmas
Who said humbug to this festive  day

I know we have lost loved ones
Very close  to our heart
Did they remove the magic wand
Or did the retailers do their part

Commercial christmas it is now
That should be its new name
Gone is the feeling of a family show
Its a crying  shame
 
So as we sit down to eat lunch
Spare a thought for people with less
Especially the word Magic
Who wants to spread happiness

So come on smiles on  faces
Light the candles  say a prayer. 
Cos its christmas day
We have magic here

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:39:00 PM
    I agree with Mandy, great job with this topic

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 4:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Seren love. I would have place this higher xx

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 12:25:00 AM
    I really like how you did this topic, Seren, incorporating the word magic right into the poem. Glad to be seeing the winners list and finally see YOUR entry. Congrats for your win. Luv, Andrea

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/15/2012 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea....Seren
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:42:00 PM
    Seren, Congratulations with your lovely deep win enjoyed the imagery. Goodnight :-) LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/14/2012 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda.....Seren
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 6:42:00 PM
    thank you' Sandy

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/14/2012 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sandy
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:58:00 PM
    :o)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/14/2012 8:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Smiles
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:01:00 AM
    I agree with you. Christmas is so commercialized today. You may like to read 'Jingle Bells'. The spirit of sharing our wealth and giving from the heart. Warm smiles always, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/5/2012 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Connie, I certainly will read Jingle Bells.....Seren
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:03:00 AM
    I can really feel this....I so agree with what you have to say. So here is a smile :o) Just for you.

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley
    Date: 12/5/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So as we (it) down to eat lunch? Ha,ha,hee,hee.. :o)
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/5/2012 2:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Grrrr read the damn thing 6 times, give me a clue lol
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:50:00 AM
    ooh me first , what a cracker.. lol,,you put some thought into this one and it works well love it xx soup