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The Brightest Of Lights

Two birds alone in flight
Together will they find the light
They spot each other with sudden fright
They huddle close
Seeing without certain sight
Together will they find the light?

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  1. Date: 1/13/2013 3:09:00 AM

    Two birds in flight / Alone in the niight / Are they through with their fright? Thank you, dear Emma, for your much inspiring poem! A lot of possible questions arousing; just from a few words! I hope you'll keep on posting! Love, Hanitra! Btw, try Richard Lamoureux' new poetry form "Questionku"! you 'll be very good at it! ..."No certain sight /But they huddle close / Does light then that matter?"

    Grindele Avatar Emma Grindele Date: 1/13/2013 8:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. c: And I just might. xD
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:13:00 PM

    I like this, nice work Emma. -skyler

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:13:00 PM

    I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEE thisssssss!

    Grindele Avatar Emma Grindele Date: 12/13/2012 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why, thank you. c;
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:39:00 AM

    I like your Poem, I hope you add your creativity to my current contest. Check out my latest poem.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 8:56:00 PM

    What a great question you ask in the ending line. Beautiful poem by a beautiful poet!

    Grindele Avatar Emma Grindele Date: 12/11/2012 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much!!(:
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:19:00 PM

    Emma, enjoyed the rhyme...pd

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:21:00 PM

    "Seeing without certain sight", nice. Better together than alone indeed. Enjoyed this...John

    Grindele Avatar Emma Grindele Date: 12/4/2012 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you(: