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Once In A Lifetime

They're once in a lifetime These moments of joy The first time you rattle That colourful new toy Your first day at school With the rest of the kids Your hair all slicked down Bad smells Mom got rid The ultimate joy Of your first tender kiss The shock when she tells you Her period she missed A puff from a cigarette Makes you dizzy and ill The beer in the closet I remember it still The joy of first child The smell of their skin The softness of touch Their sweet tiny grin Your first big promotion The raise that you get The first time you notice A grey hair NO NOT YET! Middle age then follows With a sickening thud It's all over now Your life is pure crud The sixties are next And retirement awaits Where did it go You're in a hell of a state Then someone says wryly You've had a good life 'Whatcha crabbing about?' But it still cuts like a knife These tender sweet moments You experience through time You'll remember them fondly And treasure the climb So hold on to them tightly They won't come again They're once in a lifetime They're to treasure my friend © Jack Ellison 2012

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  1. Date: 3/1/2013 11:39:00 AM

    Jack; I like your poem. You are so right. This things only happen once in a life time. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 3/1/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you kindly my dear Lucilla! I always look forward to your positive comments... big hugs, Jack xox
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:37:00 AM

    Jack, I'm totally in sync with this poem. Geezers rule! Cheers, Roy

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/7/2012 7:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This old geezer's still got it eh! Glad you could relate... have a great day!
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 3:41:00 PM

    Reading your poetry is one of those moments... Good moments are any time and any where you find them... Silly... LOL

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/6/2012 7:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are a sweetie my dear Carol! How's your Daddy doing? Better I hope!
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Oh, you are so right, Jack. There are a lot of firsts and they are "once in a life time" memories. They are special, yes. I haven't had too many of these firsts. Just kidding. Lol. Love it.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/5/2012 7:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Also a pleasure reading your comments, my dear Toquyen... love and hugs, Jack
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:35:00 PM

    Jack, this is a pleasure to read....wonderful write! Hugs

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/5/2012 4:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! Thanks a bunch Cecillia! Hugs and mucho love, Jack
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:35:00 PM

    so true and so well told!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/5/2012 4:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind words Ilene... love and warm wishes, Jack
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:19:00 PM

    Jack, nice to hold on to these once in a life time friend...pd

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/4/2012 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you pd! Your kind words are much appreciated! Love and hugs, Jack
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:22:00 PM

    This is a great observation my friend! I truly loved this incredible write, you have masterfully pieced together another wonderful poem here Jack! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece this evening! Great Work!!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/4/2012 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! Great review of my poem Russell... thank you! Cheers, Jack
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:20:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poem today, very creative and a great topics. Hugs, Gail

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/4/2012 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you muchly Miss Gail! Your words are sweet... hugs, Jack
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:11:00 PM

    So true and said so well. Enjoyed...John

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 12/4/2012 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a bunch John... much appreciated! Sorry I haven't been over to check yours out lately but I will. Not enough hours in the day... good wishes to you my friend!